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Reviews For: The Day Despair lingered Mario's Doorstep

Nicktendo Squad
2007-10-27
ch 1,
abuseThey suffered a lot in the past, but look at 'em now... :)
colette11
2007-09-24
ch 1,
abusewow! they are sure loosing the ones they love

firstn they're father, then they're mother

and not kamuke

how sad update son please
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Walkazo
2007-09-22
ch 1,
abusePretty good. But the dialogue seemd a bit wooden, and speaking from experience, theres no way anyone would leave their mother's deathbed before she was actually gone.
Still, I like how you set Mario and Luigi up to go up against Bowser.
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