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| LouAnn 2007-09-22 ch 1,  | abuseI really liked this. It's sad but realistic. Good job. |
| jtbwriter 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseThat is so sad...a little hope-but I fear you hit one of the best case scenarios we'll see. Thanks for the honesty- even if we all hope we get more then this! |
| ayesha-s 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseoh you have to continue, this is great!! wonderful chapter! |
| gsr4ever 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseOh so heartbreaking. I can't wait to see the premiere. Great job! |
| sciencekitty 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseVery realistic and very well done. Loved it. :) |
| cabooklover21 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseOMG that was just so brutally beautiful. I can't freaking WAIT for next week! |
| JackofSpade 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseFavorite Line: "It’s why you can’t forgive me.” DAMN! How does something this raw come out of the Delightful Queen of Wonderful Fluffy Baby Fics? |
| Nickye4 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful & realistic story, even though it was sad. |
| KSUnsungHero 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseJust when I thought there couldn't possibly be any other ways to tell a post-ld story, you go and write this one. I love this. It's so angsty but you know that they have enough faith to put ther relationship back together. His words are hurtful but she understand that they're both in pain and need a break. Wow. Great job, as usual:) |
| Kristafied 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseExcellent, in-character conversation which makes a great deal of sense for this scenario. |
| KneeDeepinInk 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseGood job! Nice flow of words, great story. dy |
| SidleMyIdol73 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseIncredibly realistic...and very sad. |
| Forensic Nurse 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is not how I want things to happen -- it is so sad & depressing. Yet, as always, it is beautifully written. You know Grissom & Sara so well. Let's hope that reality is a little less angsty. |
| BandG33K2008 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was amazing. Great work! |
| gsrshipper 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseWow, this really made sense to me. Really perfect in terms of how I see post-DD. Thanks for sharing. |