 Lightwild 2008-12-21 . chapter 1so beautifull,so beautifull, it's one of the best stories what I heva ever readed, I love it, that friendship, trust, hope, missery, hate, love, family, that was all so great, Michael believes him really so much, they were like one, and Karr protecting his little brother -sniff- so beautifull
I must say-exelent job |
 shadowblade-tara 2008-10-15 . chapter 1Holy crap! That was awesome! I finally got around to finishing the story, and holy - wow. Just wow. This is the best little (not-so-little) one shot I have ever read. Absolutely amazing!
One question though - Is the thing with Karr and the neruolink something you came up with? That was pretty cool too. ^_^ |
 Garcia-316hellyeah 2006-02-12 . chapter 1I love it, Karr protective of Kitt :) and Kitt bein' ** off enough to want to kill *lol* Now they are like the family they should always be :) |
 cursedgirl 2006-01-05 . chapter 1very good! whana reade more about it.. =) so please hurry up! |
 Arken Elf 2003-04-10 . chapter 1Your fanfic its fantastic.
Congratulations |
 Emily M. Hanson 2003-04-06 . chapter 1Excellent story! |
 MissDbzMedabots 2003-03-23 . chapter 1WOW! OMG! What a great story!
You have a fan! |
 Shadowfall 2003-03-02 . chapter 1Another excellent story. Wonderfully written.
You write with a realism that is quite amazing.
I'm glad that I decided to check out what types of stories were written for Knight Rider.
Again, I commend you on your excellent writing. |
 The Rose 2002-03-06 . chapter 1 OMG! That was fantastic - Wow! Hugs and applause for such
a wonderful story! Yay! :-D |
 Rachel 2001-11-24 . chapter 1 it is a brilliant read that i would suggest to anyone. It really showed what trust and love can do if you let it |
 Anna-mathe 2001-11-04 . chapter 1This is the first fic I read that had the neuro-link and such universe - and it hooked me for life!!or l!! Really, really, really good job. It's a beautiful story, beautifully told. Please, please, please write more!! |
 malantha knight 2001-10-18 . chapter 1 I loved it. |
 Cris 2001-10-01 . chapter 1 That was quite a story. I don't remember anything in the tv series about a mental link. I don't remember KARR getting a partner either. Did you create both? If so, you did quite a job. I really enjoyed this story (despite the sadistic Rehies). |
 Aura Starfire 2001-09-24 . chapter 1 WOW! that was just so amazing, you portrayed Kitt as more than a machine, as a human being with real feelings and reactions! well done! |
 Martha 2001-09-01 . chapter 1 Man, that was *good*. Good pacing, great suspense, excellent character developement. I'd like to know what happened the first instant Kitt was out of the cement- did he still want to kill Rehies, immediately, or was he worried about Michael too much to be angry? I'd guess the second- but I'm not the author.
Grammatical point: when saying 'he said' or 'she said' etc., after a phrase, the first letter ('h' for he for example)isn't capitalized. ie: "No" he said.
Great job.
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