Reviews for So Not the End of the World

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Drakonis Aurous 2008-08-11 ch 7,	abuseAnother great chapter! Kim and Ron manage to sort things out with Kim and Ron revealing their flaws and fears during the whole graduation sitch to each other (and the rest of the family). All seems well but then you leave us with a cliff hanger... Most eagerly awaiting for the next chapter. - Drakonis Aurous
Drakonis Aurous 2008-08-11 ch 6,	abuseExcellent chapter! Kim has nightmares stemming from her fears, the villains are rounded up in high security GJ facility, and Nana and Kim have a heart to heart talk - the conversation between Kim and Nana was very well done and I really liked how you portrayed Nana. IHOP? LOL! And the government in the possession of an Attitudinator? Hoo boy! - Drakonis Aurous
xyzisme 2008-08-05 ch 7,	abuseI really like this story, just one suggestion/ question. Maybe this could lead up to the montage at the end (like it seems to be doing) where Kim and Ron are at the beach and Drakken and Shego are receiving their medals while everyone is cheering. That would be a great ending to the story and this story would then show what happened between those moments. You don't have to tell me if you're going to do this, or if you have already planned this - I'd like it to be a surprise, but after the story is done maybe you could tell me what you thought of the suggestion. Again, one of my favorite stories by you (so far).
RonHeartbreaker 2008-06-25 ch 7,	abuseNice conversation. I agree with one of the other reviewers - the kitchen feels a little crowded at the outset - Nana or one of the DrsP should have ushered everybody out a couple of lines sooner. Otherwise a nice moment of emotional connection between the characters (and some good lines - "I'd be scared if I loved me") and a terrific setup for what comes next: Ron's reveal. Sorry for the delay in reviewing - read it by blackberry from on the road, and reviewing on that little keypad is a nightmare! best, RH
Samurai Crunchbird 2008-06-10 ch 7,	abuseMrDrP, I apologize for not reviewing earlier. Real life kept me offline for over a week. Once again, you added just the right amount of warmth, humor, and serious thought into your work. This especially came during the talk about the whole college sitch. The next chapter should be a real eye-opening experience for Kim, as she hears Ron's first-hand account of the battle with the Lorwardians. I look forward to reading it. Your friend in writing, The Samurai Crunchbird
The Anime Wolf 2008-06-01 ch 7,	abuseOEH ! It's so cool ! Update soon !
LTAOZFAN 2008-05-31 ch 7,	abuseAfter Kim's nightmare in Chapter Six, and her talk with Nana Possible, it's logical that we learn that Ron had a nightmare about losing Kim. And she has a good handle on talking him down from his fears. I think that it's worth noting that while Kim dreamed that she'd only lose Ron's affections, Ron was dreaming that he would see Kim die. Clearly, Ron has VERY strong feelings for KP. Also, as a cliffhanger, you give us Kim asking Ron for the details on what went down while she was knocked out, and Ron was involved in Extraterestrial Pest Control. And there is the question of whether or not Warhok and Warmonga were killed when the spaceship blew up. A very nice addition to the tale, sir! I also wonder what is going on with all those villains that have been gathered and interviewed? Clearly there are some more interesting things to come. LTAOZFAN "Them's my views, amen, so be it." "Treasure Island," by R. L. Stevenson
Danny-171984 2008-05-30 ch 7,	abuseHey! Everyone needs an escape clause. Yup, its time to get serious and talk things truthfully. So what exactly did Ron dream...I so want to know. I bet it got Nachos and Cheese. Or maybe a stuff Kim...Well, until next time. Danny
daccu65 2008-05-30 ch 7,	abuseThanks for updating. It looks like Ron and Kim are finally going to have it out about the MMP.
Josh84 2008-05-30 ch 7,	abuseAs always, another great chapter. Looking forward to the next one, as always. ;)
Quathis 2008-05-30 ch 7,	abuseGreat conversation going on between these two. Ron's got the humor and Kim's got the guilt and they both have the love. Nice to read, and really looking forward to how this conversation ends.
Sentinel103 2008-05-30 ch 7,	abuseMRDRP, I've been following along with your story for a while now. I must say that I think you have Ron and Kim's persona down pat. Ron being a true hero prefers the background. He knows that Kim is the one everyone knows, but with his secrets from Japan and the MMP he wants to go unnoticed. Kim wants Ron to take credit, but she needs to know why he wants to stay out of the spot light, Ron is going have to be truthful to her abouot hos secrets and powers (hopefully Sensi will help with this). It will be interesting to see the upcoming chapters with the trip to Japan and K/R's college talk. I wonder if Kim and Ron could get accepted to any schools in Japan. Thanks for the story, Larry (Sentinel 103)
CajunBear73 2008-05-30 ch 7,	abuseFears Ron had about what he, and his GF, got into with the Lowardians helped these two discuss their recent past and their immediate futures. Looks like what could have been the consequences of his picking a fight with Warhok and Warmonga are haunting him in the form of nightmares. Maybe between the two of them, they can help the young monkey master move on, yet not forget the lessons from this encounter with the deadly aliens. This all helped Kim step back and see how she should be including Ron in plans she has been making and to seek his input and inclusion; to have his back too. But for the moment, Kim really wants and needs to hear what happened while she was out cold on the ground before Ron took down those aliens. CB73
Kwebs 2008-05-30 ch 7,	abuseThey really need to get out whats bothering them both and this is a nice start. I liked how even the tweebs left the room. Keep it up MrDrP.
Michael Howard 2008-05-30 ch 7,	abuseAnother great installment to this series. As always, the humor was there at all the right points, but it was Kim and Ron's heart to heart talk that I liked best.

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