Reviews for Music and Lyrics

Reviews For: Music and Lyrics

XxMysticMariexX 2008-03-18 ch 1,	abuseI really have no idea why I decided to look up Jane and the Dragon stories but this one was really good. I've seen the show a few times and I think (considereing how little I've seen) that you did a really good job on this story. It was really pretty and fluffy^.^
Miss Pookamonga 2007-10-29 ch 1,	abuseOh, this was wonderful. I love how you had Gunther write the song and then give it to Jester to sing...I initially thought he was actually giving up and giving Jester the "window of opportunity", b/c he felt he'd never win her over Jester. But I see how he was trying to show Jane how he felt without actually saying it himself...and although she'll probably never know he wrote the words--it was so sweet, and so characteristic of him to want to express his feelings but at the same time want to keep them hidden. Nice work and nice characterization! Going on my faves. Luv, Miss Pookamonga ;-P
parazesis 2007-10-05 ch 1,	abuseI like it but it has a feel to it resimbiling romantic aganst, both of them seem sad almost lost, not that any of this is a bad thing, It's just one of those things that make you stop and feel, ask questions. Good job with the caricterisation both fit them, Jester with his shy but true emotions lirking just out of sight and Gunther with hot pashon hiden beneth layers of cold exterior. I comend you.
lost-im-ma-own-dreams 2007-09-25 ch 1,	abuseWow ure really talented. I wish i could write as well as you. I don't support Jane/Gunther BUT i think it's about time I do ;) keep up the good work. I LOVED IT!
Gone-away4eva 2007-09-21 ch 1,	abuseThat was brillint! i loved every seconed of it:D And yes Jester dose play a Lute. please write more like this it was great:P
OtakuChild 2007-09-21 ch 1,	abuseI LOVE this fic. :) This one really got at the heartstrings. Poor Gunther...hugs Gunther You got the characters perfectly. I can totally see this happening in one of the episodes down the line. It's really sweet of Gunther to be looking after Jane in his own way when he writes 'Mean each word you sing, or do not sing them at all.' sighs happily
AvidReaderAlso 2007-09-21 ch 1,	abuseI like your take on a more mature Gunther -- it's very believable that he would be better able to express deeper feelings with the written rather than the spoken word. And, I can also believe that he initially would see creating those lyrics as a means of besting Jester. However, his final words had me feeling sorry for him. A bittersweet ending for him, I'd say, for I suspect he's belatedly realised just how much he's given away... Lovely job. Thanks for sharing it. :D
Mine and Mine Alone 2007-09-21 ch 1,	abuseAWESOME!
KrisEleven 2007-09-21 ch 1,	abuseI love you. That is all. KrisEleven~

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