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lostladyknight
2008-06-02
ch 16,
abuseAmazing end! Did I ever tell you I loved the way you ended this one? Well, I did. I'm not sure why I loved it so much, but I really really did.
lostladyknight
2008-06-02
ch 15,
abuseGuh! I hated this chapter! So scary SO Scary! Gah!
lostladyknight
2008-06-02
ch 14,
abuseGaw. I love the early bits of the chapter. I also love how prtective Gregory is! I want him to be mine!
lostladyknight
2008-06-02
ch 13,
abuseFatty McStufferson. Lol! Classic! And that Hodges fellow! Guh. I hate him more and more as the story goes on. I like the end too! :) Sorry the reviews are lacking as I go on. I'm getting tired!
lostladyknight
2008-06-02
ch 11,
abuseHer and her ** comments! Nick really isn't fat. She's so mean to him! I love it though!
lostladyknight
2008-06-02
ch 10,
abuseI love that they shared a smile there at the end. You can really see how she's starting to feel for that Greg kid. :) I think it was by right about now in the story the first time that I was totally hooked.
lostladyknight
2008-06-02
ch 9,
abuseGaaw! This was the chapter that made me into a Greg/Mia shipper. I really hope that they give him someone like her on the show. She compliments him so absolutely well. Of course I also loved the cameos from the other shows! I love this one!
lostladyknight
2008-06-02
ch 8,
abuseI love her! Even though I love Warrick I love the way she put him in his place. Man I have so much respect for Mia. I love that even though she has a lot of insecurities she's uh... so strong. So willing to defend herself.
lostladyknight
2008-06-02
ch 7,
abuse:) I do love this chapter so much. Another one of my favorites from this story. Though, I love them all. :) Wonderful job friend. I'm just so glad you have plenty more chapters for me to enjoy!
lostladyknight
2008-06-02
ch 6,
abuseIt's so weird how much I adore Hodges. Or, did, I don't much care for him anymore after that comment about the little girl in Thousand Days On Erth. And then I read this story and I automatically revert back to hating him so much when I read this story. Guh! You're amazing at making people love or hate characters when you want them to.
lostladyknight
2008-06-02
ch 5,
abuseShe's so vunerable and I don't see why she comes off as so harsh to everyone. I spent the whole time reading this wanting someone to step up and protect her. This story really makes you think about that. Somehow she reminds me of a young girl. Either way I love her more and more as I read. Even though this is like my eighty millionth time reading this story, I love Mia more and more as I go on.
lostladyknight
2008-06-02
ch 4,
abuseI love the start of this chapter! I love the whole thing. I love the whole story, really. But the start of this chapter was always one of my favorite bits from these stories. I really love that she was showing concern for Greg from the start. He is just so easy to care about, isn't he? It's stuff like that that really made me love Mia.
lostladyknight
2008-06-02
ch 3,
abuseAwwies! I love this chapter! I also love that Mia has a little bit of history with Sara. Something about that just kinda really solidified her connection to the story and the way she fit in to the overall scope of CSI.
lostladyknight
2008-06-02
ch 1,
abuseYou know I don't know if I ever told you this but I love the way you started this story off. Back when everyone was so sure that Sara was going to die there were a lot of funeal pieces. There was something about the way you wrote this one though that was just amazing. Though it didn't make me want to cry or anything it but I guess it just made me accept it. And not just because I know she's alive, I didn't the first time I read this. It was tragic but I was ready to move on to something else. It was a great way to start this story.

This begining is one of the many reasons that I've always loved this story as much as I do!
KyliedaRock
2008-01-01
ch 16,
abuseawesome last two chapters! You had me scared for a sec there, i really thought you had killed Mia. I love this story and will be awaiting eagerly for the squeal! Love ya, Kylie xx
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