Stupendous. By far my favorite of your works yet. A constant air of mystery was present as well as a content feeling of understanding near the end. The beginning with Mike was a bit awkward, not in subject matter but in the way it was written. As the story progressed it began to flow much more freely and truly began to take shape. I don't believe catching starts are your forte.
George

i liked this story, it was short but sweet.
and had me in tears by the end.
xx

For the second time today...

wow

I'm crying right now. I hope you're happy. When I read the second chapter, I thought it might be nasty... because he's what, 106 years old? But then I realized he really IS a hundred years older than her, he just doesn't look it. Very nice story, even if I am freaking out coz Edward just died...

Aw, Edward was in love with her! AW. Now she'll be a spinster for the rest of her days, and die with that old picture of Edward and the letter in her hands... -sigh-

Very differnt idea. I really liked it.

That note was perfect.

i love your story! please write more!
love,
never going to find him

This is such an amazing idea! And so beautiful! lovely!

I. Can't. Believe. You. Did. That.

:O

Awe...

*Rain

oh that is so sweet
great story

I am hunted by the words that Edward wrote on the back of the photograph in chapter three. It's breaking my heart.

This was unreal. I almost didn't finish it, then remembered that you're an english teacher and decided that the plot had to get better. You didn't disappoint.

I was bawling like a baby by the end.

Your are now on my Fav list.

B~R~I~L~L~I~A~N~T~!

That is so sad! So tragic and terribly romantic. I loved it, you did a beautiful job. Bravo!

AW!
I made me almost cry!!
That's sad.

That was cool. And a little weird.