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| Magician of the light 2008-08-13 ch 5, | abuseAll I can think of when I read this story is 'WOW' Harry is really good at playing the batman. Will Ginny be playing the batgirl, I mean she is a red head like Barbra Gorden was. It'd be funny if Ron played Robbin and instead of Ginny getting injured Hermione could play the oricle. Sirius could be nightwing or something. It'd be really funny if they were all members of the bat clan. Well enough of my rambling. Please update soon because this story is just so good. |
| o0JubJub0o 2008-06-25 ch 5, | abusei'm looking forward to more. TTFN! ;p |
| ???? 2008-06-21 ch 5, anon. | abusebatman is not fighting a war that makes a BIG difference for capturing or killing them. in war you kill the enemy. IT IS THAT SIMPLE. what harry is doing is fighting a never ending fight. He will capture them the Ministry will let them go they will kill, rape, Torture people. Harry then will capture them and it will start all over again. What a great person to fight for justice. He is willing to let people suffer to follow a corrupt governments laws. |
| The story is bad 2008-06-21 ch 5, anon. | abuseyou should stop writing. your writing has no plot and the people are occ. |
| The French Dark Lord 2008-06-21 ch 5, | abusenice to know you are still among the living... ^^ |
| Red Jeanie 2008-06-03 ch 4, | abuse(a girl on the computer stares in shock at the computer after reading this story) THAT WAS AWSOME SHE SUDDENLY SHOUTS! No really I want an update soon. Think you can manage it? |
| GhostWalker 2008-04-11 ch 4, anon. | abuseso when are you going to update this one?? This is very good. I hope Dumbledore doesn't see fit to get in his way like he would like to do. Kudos! GhostWalker |
| Sinkingboat 2008-02-07 ch 1, | abusehells yeah! I hope this story turns out to be cool. Do you still update? |
| Dracomancer1 2008-01-17 ch 4, | abuseYES! YES! BYAH WAHOHOOHOOHOOHOO!!. ahem . now that i have that out of my system, i would like to congradulate you in perfectly fusing batman begins and harry potter. there is a beautiful unity that blurs the line between both. nice touch with the train scene. between you and me, the HP version of the train scene was wimp-e. I can't wait to see more of this phantastic story. you have got one more devoted fan here. FREAKIN AWESOME! |
| The French Dark Lord 2007-11-18 ch 4, | abusethat was some fic!Exellent work Iluv it ^^ Keep writting ;) |
| Alchemist PAC 2007-10-13 ch 3, | abuseNot bad, I can see similarities between Bruce Wayne and Harry. The only thing I see wrong so far is that Harry is a little to lose with the info. He's telling everyone and showing off. What happens if someone decides to pull a Petegrew and switch sides, or if Ron or someone decides to show off as well. The train was strict for a reason, not just anyone can and should learn it. He keeps up like this and his secret won't be so secret any more. Unless it's like superman with the whole glasses on glasses off switch that some how fools people. Anyway everything else is good; so until the next chapter good luck and have fun writing |
| Williams 2007-10-13 ch 3, | abuseThis is an interesting take on Batman and Harry Potter. I'm looking forward to seeing how you carry this out. In a way I can see the others that he has been training eventually joining him as other heroes. |
| ethiopianagema 2007-10-12 ch 3, | abuseReviewing again . Excellent as always . Are you gonna mess with pairings or is Harry gonna stay Stag and focus on kicking * and taking names ? |
| Wraith 2007-09-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseLove it, keep going. |
| ethiopianagema 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseHarry becoming the Dark Knight ... thats an awesome AU idea . Keep going on .Grammar and all that is good and your imagery is very descriptive . |