Really great story... its so original very ingenious. You're an amazing writer :)

Oh darling, this was an absolutely engaging, fun, and lovely story. It had so many elements that fit perfectly well with and paralleled the romance novel theme and I absolutely adored Jareth Corbett. Sure I generally love the Goblin King, but I think I actually enjoyed him more as the author, because he was slightly more human, yet much more like one of the characters from his book than any real man. And the way it tied up all neatly, family, friends and all, it quite lovely. Overall it was a totally sexy and feel good read, great work!

Good lord, did I really stay up until 2:00 AM reading this? Why yes I did. It was brilliant. The Wise Man is one of the most overlooked characters and it was interesting to see him here in this capacity. I loved this whole story, even though the ending seemed a bit rushed to me. So...I guess that's another one of your stories that has to go in my favorites box...its becoming a regular Ergott archive. ;)

OMG! Great chapter.

Why is it that whenever I'm looking for something new to read I stumble upon you? I haven't been disappointed yet, and from how this story is going I'm sure I won't be. I'm so glad its complete and I don't have to wait for updates cuz that might have driven me crazy. This story rocks.

I am so pleased I found this story after you had completed it because I don't think I could stand waiting for the next installment!

This is one of the most interesting takes on Jareth's character I've come accross - but I can so picture him as a writer - especially a writer of erotica!

Sarah was so likeable and funny and the detail you went into with the more minor charaters gave the whole story so much more depth.

Also: like what you did with the Wise Man - I've never really thought about what he might be doing in the Labyrinth (I was content to leave him talking to his hat!) so this made your story even more original.

Thanks for the epic that was Bodice Ripper and I hope you did well in your finals!

*in borat voice*
very nice!

-rayko

argh! please dont tell me he has gone back in time and he is going to repeat the whole event of moving to maine and meeting sarah...again. geez, i hope not. forgetting all that lovely sex is just evil.

-rayko

another sex scene in the chapter right after?! amazing, i hope there'll be more of it for the chapters to come! u do spoil us so ^^

-rayko

the sex scene was one of the most satisfying ones i've ever read on
thank you, and please write many more!

-rayko

Alice in Wonderland!” Sarah shouted, bolting upright from a nest of pillows and blankets.
“One of my favorite books,” Jareth replied, gently shoving her back down.

Alice in Wonderland is not a book, it is a Disney movie. Alice's Adventures in Wonderland, is however, a book.

good story

k

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