Painfully beautiful!

Beautifully written.

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This is sad! :(

Good job on this! :)

Anitoon3

Heartwrenching.

Beautifully written!

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Fantastically written.

I feel like a masochist for reading it over a second time...my heart literally hurts!

Beautifully written. i'm not a jacob fan but i do enjoy seeing into his mind.

Wow that was really beautiful. I've been trying to read some Twilight fanfiction but I have not found one that keep everyone in character. This is about the 5th one I've read today and the only one I really liked.

Great job.

:)

That was so sad, I have tears in my eyes. Poor Jake, you can't help loving him in this story.

This was incredibly haunting. Well done.

Now please excuse me while I melt into a puddle of tears, lol.

Really powerfull. Loved it!

OMG, that was so sad! I could really feel Jacob's pain through this, and even though I am a proud supporter of Team Edward, it sort of made me rethink my decision for a moment there.

It was amazing! (:

OMC! I'm a Jacob-Hater, but this made me cry! AWESOME!

Poor Jacob. :(

Fire and Ice was actually my favorite chapter in all three of the books. I think that Jacob and Edward have such great chemistry together. Maybe they should've both just went, "You know, forget Bella. Let's go a baseball game or something. She's not worth it, man." And become best friends and left Bella alone. I'm sure she could've had Mike Newton or something.

Anyway, I'm rambling now. I loved this story, you really nailed Jacob's character. Well done!