|Reviews for Until Her Heart Stops|
| Alexa Skywalker 7/28/12 . chapter 1
| jberri79 6/9/12 . chapter 1
| Sinister Whispers 8/25/10 . chapter 1
| Anitoon3 5/22/10 . chapter 1
This is sad! :(
Good job on this! :)
| Siriusmunchkin 2/3/10 . chapter 1
| LiLAnnie123 12/1/09 . chapter 1
| charmed1k 9/7/09 . chapter 1
I feel like a masochist for reading it over a second time...my heart literally hurts!
| Gone Gone Very Gone 7/14/09 . chapter 1
Beautifully written. i'm not a jacob fan but i do enjoy seeing into his mind.
| Princess Geta 1/3/09 . chapter 1
Wow that was really beautiful. I've been trying to read some Twilight fanfiction but I have not found one that keep everyone in character. This is about the 5th one I've read today and the only one I really liked.
| twilightlover333 12/1/08 . chapter 1
That was so sad, I have tears in my eyes. Poor Jake, you can't help loving him in this story.
| Peace Like a River 11/1/08 . chapter 1
This was incredibly haunting. Well done.
Now please excuse me while I melt into a puddle of tears, lol.
| daphne 13 8/13/08 . chapter 1
Really powerfull. Loved it!
| taylorgoesrawr 7/20/08 . chapter 1
OMG, that was so sad! I could really feel Jacob's pain through this, and even though I am a proud supporter of Team Edward, it sort of made me rethink my decision for a moment there.
It was amazing! (:
| pirate-princess1 5/13/08 . chapter 1
OMC! I'm a Jacob-Hater, but this made me cry! AWESOME!
| Astro Latte 4/24/08 . chapter 1
Poor Jacob. :(
Fire and Ice was actually my favorite chapter in all three of the books. I think that Jacob and Edward have such great chemistry together. Maybe they should've both just went, "You know, forget Bella. Let's go a baseball game or something. She's not worth it, man." And become best friends and left Bella alone. I'm sure she could've had Mike Newton or something.
Anyway, I'm rambling now. I loved this story, you really nailed Jacob's character. Well done!