 annie 2007-10-25 . chapter 1 Wow. I remember this story from...I dunno...back in 2001?? (I think) You've added alot more character discriptions, and toned down the Sakura bashing, but to be honest I think I prefer the old version. It was more...exciting? I dunno the word. Exciting and more...sensual? You could feel the attraction between her and Cell. Not to mention I liked the old title better...'The Proud Lotus and the Evil Locust'. (was that the name of it?) Anyways, I'll still be keeping an eye on this, because that was my favorite story back then. |