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| leiasky 2008-09-18 ch 1,  | abuseOh sheesh. Like you even have to ASK? Well, YEAH, she should return the favor! LOL! Very nicely done. I like little slip-ups. They are only human after all. And Jack is one HOT man. |
| Gomes 2008-08-11 ch 1, | abuseWonderfully written! I love how in-character this way, and the way both Jack and Sam responded to the situation tossed at them. I love that it wasn't a "screw the regs" but they still skirt around 'em. And Jack's reassuring speech at the end gave me shivers. :) Keep up the great work! |
| Zoser 2007-09-29 ch 1, | abuseI like your writing style - very natural. I wouldn't mind reading about the next encounter |
| EternalSleep 2007-09-22 ch 1, | abusePlease MORE! I hope you continue. Maybe a few moew slip ups and then them finally getting together. Hope to see a new chapter soon. |
| lealea 2007-09-22 ch 1, | abuseYou so have to write more to this! its ace! i love it! i'll give you a cookie! x |
| LuSo 2007-09-22 ch 1, | abuseMore! More more more, your muse can run wild with season 6, i mean how many times do they nearly die? Theres the ancient virus when Jack nearly dies and has to take a symbiote, theres Descent where they nearly drown together, theres allegiance with the reintroduction of the zatarc detector where they are all being hunted by the ashrak at the alpha site, theres unnatural selection where they meet Fifth and trick him with the time dilation device, theres forsaken where she is tied up and used as bait by aidan corso and his band of merry bad guys, theres when jack goes missing with Maybourne, theres when sam nearly gets turned into a puddle of goo by Nirrti and theres the time in Memento where they don't really have their lives in danger anymore than usual but right at the end they get invited to that state dinner :) ...Phew! (and take a deep breath, hehe) If you hadn't guessed season 6 is one of my favourites, so pretty please. |
| caligate 2007-09-22 ch 1, | abuseA few more little vignettes would be nice leading up to the end where they finally get it together. Of course, leaving out the shrub (Pete). I like your writing. Very well done. |
| TerrorizerandZooky 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseI always love reading more of a good story! |
| Odakota Rose 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseI definitely vote for more of this, I liked it! |
| MAYOGATE 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuse(an- I’m trying to figure out if I should do more with this or leave as a little vignette snapshot moment all by itself. Any votes yay or nay out there?) Well, 2 things: 1) I think it is good enough on its own, this could stand by itself as a very well-written, nicely hot, sufficiently fluffy lil piece. BUT 2) It was v v good, and as such I think it would be only fair for you to add to it - for the simple reason that I'd be pleased to read whatever else you should choose to write ;-) |
| cartertwo 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abuseYou have got to be kidding me. Yay more! Yay more! Yay more! "Next time, I'll return the favor." Oh, definitely Yay more! |
| VisualIDentificationZeta 2007-09-21 ch 1, | abusea question: why should Jack be the one to resign, why not Sam? |