 Hayakaze 1/23/08 . chapter 1Firstly, I hate this type of spontaneousity, but... it's so convenient! (I use it u_u) So it is forgiven.
Now the good stuff: homeworksh. Good plot device :D
The last line, spoken WAY after it should have been. Perfect ;)
oh and style! yes.
(i know this is late, but i just got in on the fandom, and thought you needed another review, so TAKE MY LATENESS WITH PRIDE AND HONOR) |