   Jupiter Light 1/16/11 . chapter 1oh i love Ororo and Logan :) this was a great story i enjoyed it from start to finish |
| nine 12/15/09 . chapter 1 the nine ball part was a cute finish to a hot story :) |
| Mika Uriah 4/18/09 . chapter 1 LOVED IT! can't wait to read more of your stuff. |
| NancyT 3/30/09 . chapter 1 Hehe.. Very Nice.
Sequel? |
| snlover10 1/31/09 . chapter 1 Wow, very good. Nicely written, I especially loved the ending, with the ball dropping into the pocket.
I do hope you write again soon! |
| Admonentia 6/15/07 . chapter 1 Not bad at all! |
| The Sequestered Princess 2/21/07 . chapter 1 Write a sequal! Please? |
| semprence86 5/9/05 . chapter 1 You have to write another chapter.I love the ororo logan pairing and i like how you wrote this and the way you described everything!.Good job keep writing |
| RandomReviewer 12/31/04 . chapter 1 *cheers* Who! She won! LoL :) |
| silverblade1 12/3/04 . chapter 1 Very nice story. Nothing wrong with a little lovin' on the pool table, haha. |
| larissa 4/10/04 . chapter 1 great story, please make a sequel |
| GoodGurl 3/13/04 . chapter 1 NICE! Very sensual! I liked it! I luv Logan/Ororo pairings! |
| CK4 10/15/03 . chapter 1 Nicely done. You ended it with class. |
| An9elgyrl 6/7/03 . chapter 1 Nice. Very good i might say. You have to write more RoLo fics. Go Ororo and Logan!
Keep on writing |
| Belligerent-road-pylon 11/3/02 . chapter 1 AH OW! very VERY nice. I love the sexual tention you build up! S.T the key to any good story! |
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