 Bocuma 1/10/04 . chapter 1Yay!
I love that kind of dbz fanfic...
There are all these DBZ fanfics around with Bra and Pan in, when they are older.
But I prefer fanfics with Goku, Gohan, Goten, Chi Chi, Bulma, Vegeta and Trunks in.
I really like it when they show the family side of DBZ and not the fighting aswell...
Really nicely written, and very sweet...aw...
Read my Vegeta/Trunks/Bulma fanfic btw, its similar in style, about the bond of family...
Its called Don't Forget... |
 Sadako- Tokumei Kibou 9/5/03 . chapter 1::Nods slowly:: Hmm, very WAFFY. This fic was very good. I don't see a lot of fanfics about what happens during Goku's 7 year death, long or short, but it's nice to see that one was written.
Good job on it. I felt my heart getting soft. ;
Sadako |
 anon 10/19/02 . chapter 1 this story is so touching. it's one of the best one's i've read! |
 twistinside 8/28/02 . chapter 1AWWWWWWWWWW! _ Nice mommy-son moment, I think its adorable. And not bad for writing in 59 minutes _ As with all your peices, lots of feeling and emotion in the writing and in the characters. |
 MiraiGee-Chan 8/24/02 . chapter 1awww... poor little Gohan... i couldn't imagine being him thinking that he was the one who killed his father... my poor little baby
*hugs Gohan* its ok... |
 Toki1 7/17/02 . chapter 1...I'm a softy for cute fics...*sniff*sniff* That was great! do some more- jk that was really good I cant wait to see what other fics you have up those sleaves of yours1! |
 Selenity Jade 3/24/02 . chapter 1Nicely done! Sweet, and I have yet to see a moment when Gohan is feeling so guilty about his father's death and talking to Chichi until now. You're good at originality. I love it! Great job! |
 a twinkle in the night sky 3/17/02 . chapter 1That was a very sweet little story. I lost my dad a little while ago, and hearing Chichi's words reminded me of what my mother says.
Please write a sequel, maybe one of Goku's thought's as he watches over Chichi comforting Gohan...plz? |
 underaouf 9/21/01 . chapter 1I like it! DBZ torments us by not telling us what happened then... but it also leaves us great fanfic space! I love your style of writing, too! |
 Surreptitious Chi X 8/27/01 . chapter 1That was so incredible. I love it. If I weren't so tough to written sadness I might cry. Okay, so I might anyway. That was so good. Writing it from Chichi's point of view was really amazing. |
 Marron Girl 2 8/26/01 . chapter 1 that is one of the cutest stories i have ever read. please write a sequel! |
 eRiSu 8/25/01 . chapter 1that's soo cute and yet it's so entirly sad! :( |
 Princess Tyler Briefs 8/25/01 . chapter 1You've got the most stories on my favorites! You're so talented! |
 Gohan rocks 8/25/01 . chapter 1Awww! This really sad and sweet! |
 Gohan Hug 8/24/01 . chapter 1Me wuv gohan fics! |