Hi, I like the story so far but i would like to guess that you are a fan of the old kingdom trilogy by garth nix as ryan, the dog seems to by a mimic of kibeth or the lireals dog.

creepy! is that total?

Great chapter. im really enjoying reading this story

I just thought it was weird, don't you find it odd that almost everyone that loves twilight loves maximum ride and vise-versa? It's so odd. like me for example. LOOK AT MY FRIGGIN NAME! but I still LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE LOVE MAXIMUM RIDE!
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AGAIN, CONTINUE WITH THE STORY!

this was really good. please continue. I'm dying from the suspense! (now from my spazzy-ness-ness) OMG BEST FRIGGIN STORY EVER PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE! I KNOW WHERE YOU LIVE! EDWARD CULLEN WILL KILL YOU UNLESS YOU CONTINUE! ! *goes on and on* PLEASE
CONTINUE
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STORY!
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EDWARD
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LOVE
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ANYMORE!

This is So amazingly great. I have no idea why you only have 11 reviews - its ridiculous! You totally deserve a few billion.

So, yeah. Uber-incredibly-ultra fabulous.

--Jelly1029

Fabulous story, and I'm hoping you come out with more soon, since I am not going to be able to wait very long. :)

I have a feeling I'm almost as crazy as Ditto.

-Natalie

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Say WHAT? Whaa?? Uh, who's the mother? Is there a mother? I hope there's a mother.

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I like it so far.

hm, not bad. Cory was just surprised when Blue whipped out his wings, if he spread them a little slower, he mightv gotten a different reaction from Cory. keep typing.
the Aviator

It was pretty good. I liked it, and it was very realistic. I would have liked it to be longer, encompassing more of Jack's thoughts and personality.

yes I love Fax!

so the Flock is still alive, this is good. but WHERE IS BLUE? and the rest of the Flock? keep typing, i luv this fic allready, and its just the 4th chap.
the Aviator

where is Blue anyway? i luv this fic, keep typing. now onto the next chaps.
the Aviator

I love your story, "My Entirely Original Chilche"! Please update soon! Please please please!~

Nice story, i vote for either b or c for blue's intro, but just update, or i may die of lack of good fanfic!