FI IS NOT I HUMAN! SHE IS A SPIRIT OF A SWORD! other than that, the story is pretty good.

I am really enjoying the story. I look forward to reading more of your stories in the future.

Aww, sweet. I never heard of a Fi/Bricriu romance, but this is a good story.

Odd never even thoght about them being a couple good story though needs a a sequel though Hint Hint!

Wow it was... cute! It was very creative to think of Fi and Bricru. I like most of it, but the ending was well kinda lame, no offensene! But otherwise is was awesome!

It was sweet, but I still don't understand how Fi could fall for a floating ball of light! Is this the end?

It isn't bad. Could be longer but I like it! :)

It's funkyb and weird but hey, so am I. So continue it already!

Hey Kate,

Good writing. Um...Interesting pairing of Fi and Bricriu. How did you come up them as a couple? See you later.

whoo hooo!

No offense to your very original pairing, but I really don't think the whole interspecies thing will work, especially since Bricrui is... a wisp. He's just light! Come on, do some explaining here. With your lack of details, I'm just not getting it.

Love it so far. Don't continue and I will CRY!

Your story is very...err...original. I hope you continue it soon.

Etto...