Okay... If you're trying to keep your information correct, you Might have done that but the writing style isn't at all what I would expect from such a wonderful book and movie. The writing doesn't flow, the characters don't interact the way that we know them to, and it just doesn't read well. You mix the information from the book and the movie and it really just didn't seem like a good read. If you can't take constructive criticism or help with your writing, then you really shouldn't be writing on this website. With some basic editing, this could be a good story but you need to be open to that.

Loved reading the book, I have to reread it sometime. And good fic. I can't wait to read more.

C.D.

Interesting.

C.D.

That was all right, pretty wonderful, but I would have liked more detail's on who the people were and less detail's about the clothes. But it was pretty good.

mameha is so easy going i think this is going to be much more light hearted than hatsumomo P.O.V stories

Lovely chapter. And it's great that you've done so much reading on the subject! It'll be refreshing to read a fic from someone who know more than just the movie canon.

Great second chapter I could see the work you must have put on this and I am really loking forward to the story coming on especially her times as a celebrated geisha I am looking forward to that especially great job *2 thumbs up* hope you update soon till then =D

Nice job on this story!! Good job doing research, too.

can't wait for more!^^

I am so curious and cant wait for this story I really wanted to see more of Mameha now I get too yay! cant wait till your story is updated till then =D