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Bones101 3/21/10 . chapter 18
Absolutely amazing! Please keep writing. It was very well written, detailed but doesn't ramble. Please make Harry and Ginny get married soon. Bravo!
KatieAnn101495 1/31/10 . chapter 18
Aww! I love this story! Are you going to continue on for when they have kids? You should, that would be wonderful.:)
keaneplay 5/30/08 . chapter 18
That was an immortal last line 'I'll break his neck' a fitting (comical) last line!

Do you plan on writing more? I really hope so - the build up has been tremendus!
keaneplay 5/30/08 . chapter 17
Another excellent chapter I hope there is more!
callie258 1/6/08 . chapter 18
this is an awsome fic!

please post a new chapter soon
hermioneism 1/4/08 . chapter 18
Stumbled upon this story - it is great, keep up the good work! I loved the lily brooch.
mangagirl18 1/4/08 . chapter 18
I simply love this fic. Both new chapters were AWESOME! Please update soon.
LovesReading2 1/4/08 . chapter 18
ok, the time is now 3:08am, I started reading your story around 10:30 yesterdays evening. Can you guess I like it... waiting for your next update.
Missy Liv nn Bee 12/24/07 . chapter 16
Spiffing story! Honestly it's really corking! Keep up the Grand work!

loveFANFICTION

loveLIV
mangagirl18 12/15/07 . chapter 16
OMG! This fic is ABSOLUTELY AWESOME! I just love it! I hope there'll be more to it. It's Absolutely excellent!
jerze 11/4/07 . chapter 16
please keep updating I am really enjoying reading this story. So please update again soon!
shurtugal88 10/22/07 . chapter 7
i think i might like this story just got in to it so we will see.

keep up the good work.
CyberShot01 10/17/07 . chapter 15
I find the writing a little stiff.

Eg

When they were at the grangers house Mrs. Granger asked if Molly would help with dinner and she replies

"why yes i would" or something to that effect. It is too formal, it should have been something more like,

"I'd be delighted"

as Molly loves to cook and to help out.
CyberShot01 10/17/07 . chapter 9
Calling Mr. Weasley "dad" is not something HArry would do. He respects him too much for that, I believe just 'Mr. Weasly' would sound better.
jillybear 10/12/07 . chapter 16
WOOHOO! awesome chapter! keep up the awesome work and update soon kiddo :D
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