 Bones101 3/21/10 . chapter 18Absolutely amazing! Please keep writing. It was very well written, detailed but doesn't ramble. Please make Harry and Ginny get married soon. Bravo! |
 KatieAnn101495 1/31/10 . chapter 18Aww! I love this story! Are you going to continue on for when they have kids? You should, that would be wonderful.:) |
 keaneplay 5/30/08 . chapter 18That was an immortal last line 'I'll break his neck' a fitting (comical) last line!
Do you plan on writing more? I really hope so - the build up has been tremendus! |
 keaneplay 5/30/08 . chapter 17Another excellent chapter I hope there is more! |
 callie258 1/6/08 . chapter 18this is an awsome fic!
please post a new chapter soon |
 hermioneism 1/4/08 . chapter 18Stumbled upon this story - it is great, keep up the good work! I loved the lily brooch. |
 mangagirl18 1/4/08 . chapter 18I simply love this fic. Both new chapters were AWESOME! Please update soon. |
 LovesReading2 1/4/08 . chapter 18ok, the time is now 3:08am, I started reading your story around 10:30 yesterdays evening. Can you guess I like it... waiting for your next update. |
 Missy Liv nn Bee 12/24/07 . chapter 16Spiffing story! Honestly it's really corking! Keep up the Grand work!
loveFANFICTION
loveLIV |
 mangagirl18 12/15/07 . chapter 16OMG! This fic is ABSOLUTELY AWESOME! I just love it! I hope there'll be more to it. It's Absolutely excellent! |
 jerze 11/4/07 . chapter 16please keep updating I am really enjoying reading this story. So please update again soon! |
 shurtugal88 10/22/07 . chapter 7i think i might like this story just got in to it so we will see.
keep up the good work. |
 CyberShot01 10/17/07 . chapter 15I find the writing a little stiff.
Eg
When they were at the grangers house Mrs. Granger asked if Molly would help with dinner and she replies
"why yes i would" or something to that effect. It is too formal, it should have been something more like,
"I'd be delighted"
as Molly loves to cook and to help out. |
 CyberShot01 10/17/07 . chapter 9Calling Mr. Weasley "dad" is not something HArry would do. He respects him too much for that, I believe just 'Mr. Weasly' would sound better. |
 jillybear 10/12/07 . chapter 16WOOHOO! awesome chapter! keep up the awesome work and update soon kiddo :D |