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Revya 2008-05-31 ch 4,	abuseDude! I LOVE THIS >D Damn, I hope you make a squeal of this! man so awesome
Thegoldenlock 2007-10-06 ch 4,	abuseI loved this! so nice anf Hilary and Ozuma was in their original characters all the way! good jobb!
Thegoldenlock 2007-10-06 ch 1,	abuseomg.. so good first chapter! I love the way you made both ozuma and hilary want to stay in the old times... It´s so good described! And I want to read more but right now, I don´t have time... but I´ll read the rest later today and i´ll leave another review to tell how I think the whole story went. GREAT jobb!
Christin 2007-10-05 ch 4, anon.	abuseOMG! That was amazing! You should totally write a sequal about there little adventure!
Moonlight Serenity 2007-10-05 ch 4,	abuseLove.Love.Love.Loveit. totallyawesome! Hopetoreadmorefromyou! ~MoonlightSerenity akaJess
Chelseamuffin. 2007-10-05 ch 4,	abuseOMEG THEY KISSED. (I much prefer my version-- Oh My Effing God.) ily, cos it was the awkward kiss and not at all perfect. It was in the rain (and I still want to be kissed in the rain myself, damn it), and it was so desperate and Ozuma and Hilary just both needed it and-- oh my goodness, it was hot :) One tiny thing: "Oh, he was fully capible of taking care of himself, he was a big boy, really." [Capible should be "capable".] Write more crack, woman. I demand it.
Christin 2007-09-29 ch 3, anon.	abuseAw! I loved the whole earing bit...Great Job! Please Update Soon!
Jess 2007-09-28 ch 3, anon.	abuseAw, they're getting closee!! too cutee! i lovee this! please update soon! ~Moonlight Serenity aka Jess
Chelseamuffin. 2007-09-28 ch 3,	abuseHilary clucks her tongue on the roof of her mouth and says with a certain sing-song voice, “I get it now,” when she catches him one day throwing an extra blanket of his on top of her little makeshift bed on the ground (because she was not using his. Ever). Who would share their blankets? Honestly! I don't share mine... So, I saw the ceremonial ritual part was in this chapter. fangirls It made me smile and laugh like you have no idea. Only Hilary (and possibly myself). ahem Well, I look forward to the fourth and (unfortunately) last part of this. Cos Ozuma and Hilary belong to each other.
Christin 2007-09-26 ch 2, anon.	abuseAw! That was cute! Great Job! Update Soon!
Chelseamuffin. 2007-09-25 ch 2,	abuse"Hilary wondered, almost as if she were calculating a very complicated math equation, if she could throw her shoe at him and get away with it." Best. Line. Ever. Still waiting for that exerpt about the rituals, because it made me laugh muchly. It sounded like Hilary was building up to some barbaric ritual, involving death, and all she has to say in conclusion is that she'd love the tattoo. Anyway, that has nothing to do with this. THE POINT IS that I still love this, and indeed, why can't everyone have their moments together? Wouldn't the world be a much better place if there were more crack pairings? We certainly wouldn't need the real stuff anymore. RIGHT SO. Have fun with the rest of your editings, and I'll have fun with my little FPC story where Heroine falls for Nerd Supreme and they grow up to have much babies. (Or not. But I'm sure you prefer that version to the one where they break up soon after.)
Moonlight Serenity 2007-09-25 ch 2,	abuseohh...wicked. I likee it! please update soon! ~Moonlight Serenity aka Jess
Moonlight Serenity 2007-09-22 ch 1,	abuseWOW!! wayy original. This'll be wickedd! please update soon! ~Moonlight Serenity aka Jess
CHRISTIN 2007-09-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseI have no idea what just happened all I know is that it submited my review before I was done typing...Damn...(Yes this is Christin With the IloveInuyasha88 email..usin moms email) Anyway... Great Job.. Cant wait to read more! Update Soon!
Christin 2007-09-22 ch 1, anon.	abuseW

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