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| Gothicruby 2008-03-12 ch 1,  | abuseThat was adorable; just simply adorable X3 I like how you had Stork accurately time out how long he had to practice before going back to the deck; it was very in character. Great justification for that one episode too; really does make sense X3 And you're right; he's not as insane for loving the ship and guitar as Finn and Piper are for music XD to words; earphones! right? XD Anyway; great fic, I loved it =3 |
| angel raziella 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuseInteresting, kinda funny, he seems a little bit depressed though, poor Stork, -_- *sigh* in anycase, nice, a bit short, but nice, ^_^ Angel Raziella X X X |
| Helene2Troie 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abuseHey Dotskip! I love your little story, it was a nice break from all this gory stuff you find out there. I like your writing style- very witty! However, since I don't know any of the bands/songs mentionned, I was a little lost. But hey, it didn't bother the story flow that much. |
| girl with grey eyes 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abusenice. good job at a stork fic, his character is usually squished into the foolish pessimist, so it's good to see him portrayed as a person, not the comic relief. GWGE X |
| Xekstrin 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseThe ending wasnt bad at all! I thought it was down right cute. So glad you could finally write your bass story! Good for you, sweetie! A few pointers- when writing in italics, this generally means you're writing the thoughts of the character at that very moment. Hence, instead of "They must have been really yelling now, he could still hear their muffled voices." it would be "They must really be yelling now, I can still hear their muffled voices." Hope that helps... \__/) My coffee for you! |
| Mariphasa Hecatene 2007-09-23 ch 1, | abuseI like the idea of Stork as a bass player (yeah, they're always the weird moody ones =). And the way he handles the breakup of the quarrel is good. --Do you think you'll ever write a Hawks fic that's in canon? I really like your style and I'd love to see what you could do using the series characters alone. |
| horribly random 2007-09-22 ch 1, | abuseha that was good, and I don't doubt that stork could play an instrument but I pictured more of a piano but bass is good:) |
| .PhaerynTao. 2007-09-22 ch 1, | abuseHeh heh... Stork would make an awesome bassist. And I can totally see him listening to Phish. XD Very nice, I liked that a lot. :) |