Reviews for Moving On
TexannaRose 6/23/09 . chapter 1
i loved it!its very good!
smackedfan454 5/21/09 . chapter 1
ahh sweet please write more
Hazmatt 4/15/09 . chapter 1
Amazing story! I really enjoyed it! Perfect!
Jess-SVU 10/6/07 . chapter 1
Great capture of Mac, a side of him that we all know that he possesses yet we dont see it that much. I like this fic alot! ] Good job!
JamNotJerm 10/6/07 . chapter 1
Aw! More SMacked pieces!
E-AJ-15 10/5/07 . chapter 1
Great Mac/Stella fic liked the way that you wrote these 2 out
Wudmeister 10/4/07 . chapter 1
Great fic, love Smacked and I wish that they get together!D
DSM89 10/4/07 . chapter 1
That was hot, and it's so VIVID! I imagined the whole thing, you just needed rain and your set P SMACKED FOREVER!

Loved this...

Mac looked around, his vision blurry from the alcohol and tears. A figure came out and sat down next to him. He immediately crumbled into her embrace, feeling a sense of warmth build at his core. Mac began to shake silently, the tears trickling down his cheek landing on the embracers shirt. She didnt seem to mind as she just continued to rub his cheek, removing the droplets and wiping them down on her shirt.
TNM1 9/24/07 . chapter 1
Aww this is so good, I really liked it
Ms. Danny Messer 9/23/07 . chapter 1
OMG that was beautiful! Hooray for Smacked D
DC-House 9/22/07 . chapter 1
that was beatiful Nat! I can't wait till these 2 get paired either!
Mouth2mouth 9/22/07 . chapter 1
Aww! That was awesome, I too can't wait for the day that Smacked happens.
RoxyLovesHouse 9/22/07 . chapter 1
Aw Nat, that was so sweet! Hot and sweet :P
Deco-MarkZ 9/21/07 . chapter 1
Dayum...this was a good fic NatD
GSR-Hameron-LUV 9/21/07 . chapter 1
Aww enjoyed every second of it:) Good fic Nat, Love it:D
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