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Reviews for: Foolishness
Rosa Cotton
2008-04-23 . chapter 1
Thank you so much for giving us a glimpse of Marian's reaction to Robin's return! This was very good. Totally believable she was caught between pretending she did not care that he was back while also being happy. You wrote her very well.

"Foolish boy. Foolish, arrogant, dear Robin..."

A great ending that says it all.

Wonderful job done. :)
Kalli J. Wolfram
2007-09-26 . chapter 1
Awesome! I really liked this story. Good job! =)
Wedjatqi
2007-09-26 . chapter 1
Very nice. Thanks for sharing.
twilite princess
2007-09-24 . chapter 1
Ha! If only both of them KNEW how the other felt...that might actually be a good story...
First one I've seen like it! I loved it!
gatewatcher
2007-09-22 . chapter 1
Nice! I can just see her pacing in her room, ranting and feelign foolish... and not liking it one bit!
Thanks for sharing.
Lana
Mira-DaleBlackStark
2007-09-22 . chapter 1
AH! loved it!
DeanParker
2007-09-22 . chapter 1
yes...Foolish, Arrogant, Dear, Sweet, Loveable, Cute Robin that we Love and Adore!!

Good Story...
twelvestopsandhome
2007-09-22 . chapter 1
I really enjoyed that! Never read one like it actually...very good idea!
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