You have a lot of mistakes. Commas and punctuation issues makes it hard to read...kind of gave me a headache. You should get a beat reader... I dont think I've been a member for a month yet though, otherwise I'd he available. You have a great plot and everything, but for me the punctuation kind of ruined it for me. :/ Just keep working, it took time or me to get to the skill level I'm at with my writing.

good story line! i know that it is complete but i think you should have a beta look at it and repost it! that would be awesome

Alex

loved it, been reading your story most the afternoon and i've really enjoyed reading it ( xx

Wonderful, i love it!

Well they got there Happily ever after, and i adore the ending. Over all there were small mistakes through out the stor but you made up for with the catual story. I think this story is brilliant. Exellent job.

Well i wouldn't stop reading it. I am enjoying it and with me cetain characters have to be in a certain light or the writer has to be good or the story enjoyable or i will just hate the story, i won't feel the emotions like i like to when reading and i will hate characters but i can honestly say that i can feel the emotions. So Good work. God it feels weird saying it to someone older than me... LOL

AMAZING! BUT i hate most of the Weasley's in this story just to point that out. but loving it.

OMFG! I LOVE IT! AMAZING! WICKED! there are loads of words going through my head and there all good apart ones about The Weasley family and Harry.

Me yet again. I really like. Well i am now going to keep my reviews short. :} so i live it. {:

It's nice to know her friends care about her. Well Harry Potter is offically a ass hole. He can't barge into someones home and treat them like that. Well i'm to off to see the wizard, The wonderful wizard of oz. SOS got it stuck in my head, but i don't know why, haven't seen the movie in years. I'm off to read the next chapter.

AWW, so sweet. That was so romantic, i like it that he went to her meeting to see how it wen tbut i like it. It keeps gettign btter and better.:}

HAHAHA, That was funny, i would pay to see that. Well i love it even more now, i would tell you to keep it up but i think you will since your stories are wicked. :)

I still love it, what a ass, treat her like dirt then boss her around he has no right to do that. Well i am hooked. A couple of mistakes but nothing big.

Love Fran

7 Reviews to one story in a row, i've never done that before... LOL. Well i am still loving it. Can't wait to read more. Well i am going to read more ;]

Me yet again, well i love it. She deserves happiness as does he so they deserve eachother.