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Herooftimes
2008-07-24
ch 3,
abuseyes! another chapter!...but i didnt really get it. :'[ could you explain please? i want to understand...
Withering Soul
2008-07-07
ch 1,
abuseI didn't get it. >.>
But, uuh, it was still interesting to read.
Doctor Yami
2008-07-06
ch 3,
abuseIt's either like several different stories were chopped up and thrown together, or the same storie's time line was chopped up and mixed up.
idkwtusb
2008-07-04
ch 2,
abuseXD
Herooftimes
2007-11-14
ch 2,
abusethank you. ireally wanted this story to be expanded and i hope that your going to wirte more of it soon. this whole chapter was awesome, epecially kakashi's parts.
Herooftimes
2007-09-26
ch 1,
abusethis was just awesom. the ending was great. it all just came togethrr and .whoa. and thatnks for the explanation at the end.
i'd really like if you expanmded on this, too
NoNoWriter
2007-09-23
ch 1,
abuseI kinda loved it. I mean, I got a sick and twisted feeling from it. Dark and unhappy.

The part I loved the most was the line: Itachi smiled.
It made me go all 'Kya!! XD'
Itachi smiled, Itachi smiled, Itachi smiled!! I'm so happy now.
I even like the name. Sick is such a nice word along with sickening and other words alike.
Doctor Yami
2007-09-23
ch 1,
abuseStrange. And made absolutely no sense.
blood-angel 666
2007-09-22
ch 1,
abusewow...normally drabbles and poems..stuff like that have never interested me but this was just amazing...

i'd love to see this become more of a ficlet type thing..more chapters but they all are formatted like this one, and in the end have it leave a startling revelation like naruto having an advanced strand of the kyuubi virus that had evolved enough that it became sentient.

from their you could just leave it at implications about what became of naruto and the kyuubi virus.

but i would definitly love to see this fic exspanded on, it was simply amazing
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