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I loved the 'thoughts on sick' fully and completely. thank you. It cleared alot of things up.. Naruto experimented on at for minutes, mad and without a goal to help him. This 'personality' of the Kyuubi he has invented, the battle of atoms between disease and cure... written very awesomely :] but why .. does he want to bite.. ahh i dont want the story to end :[

Woah a double chapter update... Hinanta :/ ok so im thinking this is before itachi killed kisame because of his sickness. why would he follow kakashi so far... nice chapter you have here :D

i hope this continues :]] just started reading fanfiction again oh.. an hour ago XD. i dont understand, naruto is sick but does not feel sick?

disturbia

Heh, this story is so awesome. It's such a different take on the Naruto story. And I like how well you can show whats going on but you dont really tell. Another great chapter, looking forward to the next one.

Yes!! another good chapter, i have to say i liked this one more than the last one. :]
Naruto being there the hold time... Saru locked up... the akatsuki's new objective..
Itachi...wow.
but wait.. how did the sickness get back out if Naruto's still alive..
oh, so Narutofailed kakashis little survival test? but didnt he get the bells.. i mean, kakashi was choking with those needles, they wouldve been right there
I wonder just what that monthly session is..
Great chap!! :D i hope another comes soon!

Great concept, and excellent use of 'showing not telling'. :D

Lovely and creepy as well - Naruto reminds me a bit of that Spruce Goose aviator guy that's all OCD about germs and toenails who I can't believe I have forgotten the name of. You know who I mean.

yes! another chapter!...but i didnt really get it. :'[ could you explain please? i want to understand...

I didn't get it. >.>
But, uuh, it was still interesting to read.

It's either like several different stories were chopped up and thrown together, or the same storie's time line was chopped up and mixed up.

XD

thank you. ireally wanted this story to be expanded and i hope that your going to wirte more of it soon. this whole chapter was awesome, epecially kakashi's parts.

this was just awesom. the ending was great. it all just came togethrr and .whoa. and thatnks for the explanation at the end.
i'd really like if you expanmded on this, too

I kinda loved it. I mean, I got a sick and twisted feeling from it. Dark and unhappy.

The part I loved the most was the line: Itachi smiled.
It made me go all 'Kya!! XD'
Itachi smiled, Itachi smiled, Itachi smiled!! I'm so happy now.
I even like the name. Sick is such a nice word along with sickening and other words alike.

Strange. And made absolutely no sense.