Oh, WOW.
Just, WOW.
Allen's speech on how he knows his way around a brothel...pure win!

Drunk Kanda and Allen semi-friendship FTW! Those 2 scenes were absolutely priceless. It makes you think that if Allen and Kanda didn't hate each other, they'd be such good friends! XD if that makes sense.

do you feel better now that it is over? It was a really good story, you should be proud.

Awesome prologue! The arrival of the girls to Lady Cho's house of ill repute was hilarious. "Ellen" looks very cute in her white outfit. Lavi with his crooked breasts was a stroke of genius. xD;; I loved it. BTW Happy New Year 2009! *faves*

Ehrr..ò_ò
Okay, well. The eleventh chapter was fantastic *w* I always would have loved to see a drunken Allen throw things to Lavi, really, exactly this, but no one before you did it ç_ò
So, I have no problems with that, it was good *w* Your Allen is amazing, I love it, and I hope to see other fics of yours with him like that. Liike also the one with him who returns from Africa, was it yours? Wonderful XD

The 12th..well, that was..Mh, yes actually it was rushed XD I was sorry for Kanda, but ehy, life is life. BUT SINCE I am one of those LavenFans who think on the line "rush all the story if you want, but not the laven part! *O*", that didn't bothered me too much @_@ What bothered me a bit is the last part with Lavi and Allen, who hold their hands and okay, it could be mean that they decided to stay together however in the end, but.. ç_ç I would have liked some more about them, not much, it was also okay a thing like, after the rainy part, "Ehi, Allen..scratch all that, I love you too damn much *passionatekissèès*" (sorry, I know no one wouldn't have liked a thing like this XD) just to make it clear they were together (cause...cause they're together, right ç_ç ?)

And sorry if I said this, I've read you tried to make it better. Don't worry, it still remains a great story which sometimes I even quote yaoistically on my dgm forum, talking about mysterious Ellens and hot Yuukos XD

Please write other fics noow, cause your style make me laugh so much *ww* !! I'll wait *w* patiently *w* wait *w* *sits*

hey its good dont worry

yar own fault lavi

Yay! You updated this story! ^0^

Great! ^^b

It was a good story! I really enjoyed reading it. I hope you starting writing something else! Happy writing!
~Flightless Bird

i likes it. did Kanda love the guy? i got confused about that part. great job with the story though. ^ ^

i like this... waiting for more

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! ARGH!! What the hell was that??!! It was just too amazing! O_O
I thought it was a KAL, but in this way is really better, LavenLove forevaH *jumps through the hall* *with laptop in hands* *actually the computer jumps too*
I've read on LiveJournal the fic "The fox, the bird and the frog", I couldn't stop laughing for I don't how much time XD
UPDATE, SLAVEWRITER! ò__ò I. Pretend. The 11th chapter ò_ò *UmbridgeStyle*

*dies*

que! LOVE IS FAIR!

Okay so I have a big question...you said the fic is Yullen but it's becoming Laven...why...? Or is it not Yullen anymore?

mwahahahahha is there going to be some LavixAllen in the next chapter perhaps? *wink wink*