Well, to put it bluntly. I don't like t.

Dude i thin this is a pretty good story keep up the good work! dont quit now on us

awesum story...i wished u didnt give up on it...please tell me im WRONG!...

I LOVE THIS STORY...i just hate the fact u gave up on it(please tell me im wrong) i hope u finish it

? ah boo hoo. come on man! i enjoy this, you have more reviews than you have chapters. that in its self is good. just keep it up. :)

ok, this chapter, i loved a bunch. i love the growing familiy bond you got goin. keep it up!

i love this chapter in piticular. Its really lighjt hearted, im sure thats what you were going for. right? :)

heh, kinda reminds me of Oni in my story. I like it, i dont even know of this anime and im getting into the story. :D

O_o... this is your first writting?...EVER? THATS AWESOME! my first writting was, how shall i say.. uh, horrible? but your starting off great for a first time. cant wait to read the rest!

BlueIrish

Keep it up this story is getting real good.

Good chapter. Just beginning. Continue.

Good chapter, but was that bear a demon bear?

Eff the naysayers. Captain America says "THUMBS UP, SOLDIER!" Good job!

Good story. Please continue.

Very nice, I liked how Barabaras isn't too fond of him.

BTW when you can read my story (the first one and it's sequel when you can)

Very good start, use that line thingy to separate you're last bits of stories with you're final comments.

keep going.