More reviews! _

This was sweet. Very beautifully written, angsty, lovely. Very well done. Poor Jyou, and poor Yamato! Why can't they be together? XD

Great work, and looking forward to reading (and reviewing!) more of your Digimon stuff. _

this is a story which has stuck in my mind for over a year now, i just think you should be way proud of that. i keep coming back to it, it's beautiful. It brilliantly portrays feelings and incomprehension and the way people hide who they are behind what they're supposed to be... thanks so much for this story

fuck this is weird. damn weird. bloody good, but damn weird. jesus... i love this bit...

" The way he’ll brush a lock of my hair out of my eyes when he thinks I’m asleep, that same smile radiating at me through the darkness. Even if I can’t see it, I still know it’s there.

I just don’t know what else is there.

What are we?

Sex-friends?

Roommates?

Lovers?

What would you do if I told you that I love you? Would you smile and say you love me too? Would it scare you? Would you reject me?

Dammit, Jyou, why won’t you just let me know?

Why can’t I read you like I can everyone else? "

Ooooh... sweet... Love. Love it muchly!

Dang.. I found this kinda sweet... _ Wonderful fic, Musouka. Luv it!

Love it! I loved how you wrote Yamato in this. I dunno, you do such an excellent job of telling things from his POV, especially when you do it in first person. I loved the ambiguity of their relationship, and I love that this was in the Usotsuki universe. This was a wonderful back story for this and I loved how this gave a glimpse at Yamato and his feelings in all of this. Very cool, Musouka-san! -

I really like this. I like the attitude, I think - Yamato to a T, really. ::adds it to her favorites::

Wonderful piece of angsty sap. Jyouto/Yamajyou/whatever is my absolute favorite yaoi couple. _ I loved it, and I loved Jyou's reference about the shojo manga "where everyone is gay and open about it." Ain't that the truth? *Please* keep up the good work.

Awwwwwwww!

Ohhhhh : blows nose: that was so sad. That had to be the most melon collie yamajyou I've ever read, but it fit the story very well. Nice job. .

Ah... *lies back in smiling teary mode* This was so beautiful... and I love the heart Jyou gave Yama. That was so... *searches for synonym for 'cool'* Original? It was really cool... it's kinda like a metaphor for the story, almost. *sighs again* Awesome, excellent fic... who did you sell your soul to posess your writing genius? And where can I find them?

Most excellent fic, Musouka-san. I love the interaction to death, I love the imagery, and I *love* the realism. The realism was what got to me, personally. You portrayed the mentality most excellently, how life was not a shoujo-manga, Yamato's dates... Er, I seem to, ah, have something in my eye.. *sniffle.*

Musouka-saaan! *flying tackle glomp* I love this fic! I absolutely love it. Your Usotsuki universe has always intrigued me and this was a great little insight into it. Of course, now I'm really curious about the rest of the fic, but I guess that's beside the point. *grins* I loved their interaction (as always) and the heart sculpture that Jyou gave Yamato. From his thoughts aboubt it, I could almost see him smashing it when Jyou eventually "breaks up" with him. *sighs* Angst. Great fic. Thank you so much, this is a wonderful birthday present.

Dammit...the spacing is really screwed up...I'll have to fix it on my PC later...