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Diva Actress
2007-09-22 . chapter 1
"her" is Maureen, "him" is Roger, and the African American man is Benny.
Det. Flawless
2007-09-22 . chapter 1
IDK...Mimi? Angel? Joanne? Benny? Collins? Mark?

This is kind of interesting!
armageddon-incarnate
2007-09-22 . chapter 1
Uh... Benny has trapped Mimi in a relationship, and... Roger is her 'safety spot'? I really have no idea. I'm not a very good guesser (SP?), as you could tell.

Once again, loved this. More soon, maybe? I'm gonna be thinking about it for a while... Awesome job. *goes off to ponder.
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