interesting.
If you ever find time to update, I'll look forward to it.
xD

An entertaining read indeed! Glad to have you post this fic here ^^

Ha, that's Shikamaru alright. Good for an amusing read.

Uh...wow. VERY little details and not very well thought-out. You might want to consider this as an ok rough draft, but definitely not a final process. It doesn't sound like you're going to continue it either, like it's a random spoof almost. That's how I sum it up. On the whole, not very interesting or long.

nice, please update, more words per chapter please. :3

kool, I like the crossover, if fairly good. This is one of the best crossovers i've seen yet. I wish it would have been longer though...but still very good 5/5

I actually laughed at the end.

Execellent job!

I love the "KIDS THESE DAYS!" and the BOOM. part!~

Great story idea!!^^

good story. hope it was a bit longer.