Reviews for Half Formed Words

wordsofjade 2007-10-07 ch 1,	abuseThat was amazing. Am-a-zing. You're writing is profound. I loved it!!
Clar the Pirate 2007-09-26 ch 1,	abuseThat is such a perfect way to describe this story, "a failed fairy tale". It's almost an oxymoron, gah, you would not believe the number of thoughts you have set off in my head. My favourite part is the last sentence; concluding by ignoring the hero and heroine it adds to the sense of failure. And just the matter-of-factness and its isolation; it's as cold as the snow.
Thai Libre 2007-09-24 ch 1,	abuseI thought it was very good,and very sad. I liked! Keep Writing!
Acy Yua 2007-09-22 ch 1,	abuseVery sad...and terribly romantic. I really enjoyed it. One quibble though - musket balls are not like bullets. They are considerably larger and just one would have been enough to knock his whole back out if fired at the right distance. Five wounds would not have left the Beast in one piece - he would literally have been blown to pieces. Other than that, it was a dramatic, gripping one-shot. Keep writing!
A Writer Darkly 2007-09-22 ch 1,	abuseMakes me sad, but i love it. Excellent job.