Oh, this was cute. You did a good job on Mal's voice. Had me laughing and all. The dialogue format was a bit hard to get used to. Interesting that you learned it that way.

ha! poor mal always bringing trouble down on himself. shiny story

this was an incredible little story.
I love the simplicity of a well told story, that and how you wrote the characters was like you had watch an episode and then wrote it out.
I really enjoyed it.

Very cute one shot :)

Aw, super cute!

cute!