Gee, I wonder what it might be ;).

Very sweet. I love stories from Raine's perspective.

That was beautiful, throughout the whole thing images came up... You weave quite a convincing story, complete with the voice/character of Raine! :D

Awesome! I absolutely love Raine and this is so GREAT! *I lose the thesaurus again, okay?* Just...great!

Whoa, it's a really sweet fic. Really, nothing much to say except i'm overwhelmed. Write on! .

After reading the events leading up to the proposal from both perspectives, I would be delighted to see a fic during it. You are a marvellous author.

This is so sweet! I love how you did the ending, having it be at that moment in time. :) This is an awesome fanfic. :)

This is a fantastic story.I especially like the way you peer into Raine's psyche.I also like the way you portrayed Lagunas attitude towards life from her perspective.Keep writing

Oh, and how blind she was... terrific fic!

I'd just like to say that I think you write really well and I absolutly (ech, that wasn' spelt right!) love this fic! Especially the end!