Whoa... Creepy story! Its different from the other stories I've read. And when I read that Torn was dead... it was absolutely shocking! And Ashelin KILLED him! His own girlfriend! Weird...

And when Ashelin started ranting at the Ex-KG Commander's body... it was a bit strange...

So I guess Ashelin's gone crazy now?

That was quite...quite...well wasn't it?

What I mean is, er...i don't know what I mean. But this story definitely woke me up. I thought it was going to be a Ashelin x Torn extravaganza, but she KILLED him? I did not see that coming. i really didn't Very original and, and...well, I liked it.

I am not making much sense here, but I am definitely complimenting your story. I just can't really restore lateral thinking right now.

Oh wow... good job. Ashelin was just so in-character. I like how you kept your cards under the table like that, so when you revealed that he was really...*sob* ...it was a shocker. I think AUs like this are great because of the very real possibility that this could've happened.

This fic reads very differently the second time... it's dynamic, I like that. I'm putting it on my favourites list. Again, good job. We need more fics like this in the fandom.

whoa. that was really, really good.