i comented before but i just had to say i read this story again and i love it. i also want to know if you did continue this serries, if so whats the title of the next story?

it was wonderful. That was a perfect ending that I hadn’t honestly even seen coming. It was great. Well written.

poor Quatre. He was so damn close too. But at least its not hopeless.

That was a good ending - and even the thirteenth chapter!

Hurray for Sally and Hilde, and Duo wasn't even too annoyed. It certainly sounds like a sequel is coming - we want to know what happened to Quatre and Trowa, if Hilde and Sally find a place... and whether or not Wufei kills them, of course!

but i so wanted that kid to die...and your going to write another story with quat and trowa right?

Love it.
XD Poor Duo.
He's gonna have to play peace-keeper.
The ending rocks.
You tied pretty much everything up...which is something a lot of writers have trouble doing. Or they don't want to, b/c if they don't, then they'll have something for the next story. (I did it and it was fun XP...though a reviewer was like "how the hell is this story over!?")
Ah well...
Loved it.
~Emma

I think, you are not dragging your story to long, It's opposite, you are doing great work by writing it.
I like your story and in my point of view you could write it a longer^^.

Heh, awesome... Silly Quatre, thinking everything would be fine when he's asking a frigin' VAMPIRE HUNTER to become a vampire for him... But good for Sally and Hilde, and Duo's just being melodramatic there... great.

cool

Great start! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing.

well at least the innkeeper was kind. Ouch. Poor Trowa.

at least Duo managed to get away. Poor Thomas.

okie this is taking way too long to get to the point...sigh..the story started off so well but with each chapter it seems to get worse...stop with the expance of characters...focus on one pair or two for the most or it just gets too confusing and boring to read...

Heh, a third story? Awesome! Hope Heero and Duo aren't going to have a problem with the ohter vampire... And, if Quatre got close enough to Trowa to elbow him in the stomach, wouldn't Trowa be able to recognize him later? That could cause some problems...

8-now those dreams were a bit interesting. Sickness hopefully isn’t a foreshadowing.

9-what is it with you people and cliffhangers! I swear you all do this to me on a certain day or my bad luck only gets worse with every hundred fanfiction I read. I wanna know. Please please update.