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knightsbridge
2009-10-26 . chapter 10
I keep fining these gems in other peoples list of favourites. and I'm sure glad I found this one. So far it's quite brilliant, and I've laughed myself silly.

I REALLY look forward to reading more

Darian
Karl Skywalker
2009-09-14 . chapter 10
Wonderful story!

I enjoyed this story very much :D It is a sweet story.

One minor issue I do have, why would Harry prefer to take Auror job to DADA professor? I would think DADA suits him better. I hope that Ginny could join him as Auror as well. I don't think they would like to be seperated again for a long period. They would make an excellent Auror team the way they complement each other. It would be, in my opinion, if they both have job at Hogwarts. However, it is your story and I will read it :)

Eagerly await another chapter!
kateydidnt
2009-09-14 . chapter 9
sometimes I really hate FFN./ For example right now. I managed to read the chapter while at work, but I didn't review it. I figured I would be able to do that when I got home. But no, FFN has decided that chapter 10 does not exist at the moment.
Anyway, I would have to agree with Ginny--it *really* is none of Hermione's business.
LOVED Harry consulting Ginny about whether to stay at Hogwarts or join the Aurors. I think Harry is tired of being alone and sharing his life and decisions is not a burden for him anymore.
Love it!
Thank you thank you thank you!
PS your italics are messed up near the end of the chapter, ou've got incomplete code showing.
JaneLovesDrama
2009-06-30 . chapter 1
cough*FEVERPITCH*cough
I love that movie so so so much.
Piper93
2009-05-24 . chapter 1
this story reminds me of feverpitch so much
rdprice29
2009-03-29 . chapter 7
OMFG, this is like the most perfect H/G story I've read in FOREVER and just about the most perfect way I've thought about/read to have them married.

AWESOME STORY!
LadyNightSky
2009-03-28 . chapter 9
Adore it, it made me laugh myself silly.
Purplpocadots13
2009-02-18 . chapter 9
love the story post asap =) -Holly
Enchanted49
2009-02-14 . chapter 1
What a unique premise, quite enjoyable.
IllusionedDreamer
2009-02-14 . chapter 9
This was so superb! awesomeness incarnate. ;p
It made me laugh out loud a lot, and Im the one who rarely laughs while reading, so Kudos and update soon!
DukeBrymin
2009-02-13 . chapter 9
Great chapter!! I'm happy that they were able to arrange married quarters, and loved McGonagall's line about reproducing!
kateydidnt
2009-02-13 . chapter 9
Ok, there were SO many points where you had me bursting out with either laughter or cackles for example:
“I’m sorry,” I lied, “but if you prefer, we could find ourselves a flat in Hogsmeade.”
and:
I will give you both detention for life if you even think about reproducing in my House.”
and:
When I got to Quidditch practice, I found that shoes and streamers had been tied to the handle of my broomstick.
and:
“A housewarming party usually implies that we have a house,” Harry pointed out as soon as I’d suggested the idea after dinner one night. “We’ve got…half a common room, one bedroom and a very small loo. I can’t see us having half the school in for a party.”

All hilarious!

“I could just alohamora it and be done.”
I guess that's true--but I would think there were house locks that alohamora wouldn't open and I would definitely assume the Blacks would have taken advantage of such an item.

"And they’ll be gawping at me, too.”
Er. . . didn't you say in a previous chapter that Harry had gotten over being stared at?

LOVED McGonagall's reaction--knocking over the ink, the stunned silence and the third-year flooing in at that moment and more or less scurrying out. And I even more love the fact that her reaction is tempered by the fact that she really can't DO anything about it--they're both legal adults--and she knows it.

Wait, didn't Dennis die in 7?. . . oh No! that was Colin. Sorry

There had to have been married students in the past though--a school that is a thousand years old? Had to have happened at one time or another. And despite how much the wizarding world seems to have separated itself from muggle trends, I don't doubt that in the middle ages and earlier wizards were marrying as young as muggles did.

GREAT CHAPTER. Thank you! Thank you!
Reena01
2009-01-12 . chapter 8
This was brilliant, very clever and really funny. I hope you write more :)
DukeBrymin
2009-01-05 . chapter 8
Wonderful, wonderful! Great story, loved all of it.
Is it complete? You seem to have finished up all you needed to, but fanfiction doesn't have it marked as complete.
Thanks!
DukeBrymin
2009-01-05 . chapter 7
Aw, what a wonderful, sappy wedding! Perfect for them!
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