this was freaking laughable. i kept laughing. god. especially went Juugo came in. lol. i'm still laughing craps... haha.

LOL. I couldn't stop laughing when Juugo came in. ROFL, omg, dude, that was awesome. And your first smut too? AMAZING. I love the idea of him turning into water for...that...kind of purpose... lol

Adore your writing style,it was a nice peice of smut

oh my good god!
now that is something i dont mynd shamlessly rooting for.
may karin open her eyes to the wonder that is suigetsu.
amen

Very nice. Though I would have liked for it to have gone further, still, it was good.

OMG i love it that was so cute! actually more like dirty, but it was so well written.. I was laughing my head off "Ill go buy detergent, then." haha, i hope u may write more!!

I love this. Quite a lot.

So random, yet it's fekking hilarious.

go suigetsu! XD

LOVE the story. And Thank you SO Much for commenting on mine. The reason Karin's not as...brash as she is in the manga is because she's really trying hard to work on her anger issues and wants to be more likeable.

Nice and hot.

Oh wow. This fic is absolutely amazing. I love how you made both in character.

It was really good for your first smutty fic. ;D

Ja ne!

xoBreathe

I like, I like. Write more. We needs more lemons! LEMONS. Sprite is good too, now that I think about it.

Ja Matta

K-San

wow you english people don't stop in amazing me with your creative swears "**tard" and so on. I liked it. It made me laugh a lot.

I've never really thought of Suigetsu and Karin together..
but now i like this pairng ^^
I think you did a good job with the characters
This a bad conbination, 2 characters woith bitchy/bossy attitude together, spells HELL!
or maybe not...^^
awsome, funny yet, smexy!
^__^

I thought your story was cute, funny and sexy all at the same time. It's pretty good for a first time smut. I never did one yet so I'll understand what you went through when I do. Keep writing! :)

its a real good story. wouldn't have guessed it was your first time writing this type of thing.heh. ;)

i can't decide if juugo thinks she wet herself or if he actually KNOWS...eh.