AW come on! That's not realy the end is it? I hate when I get really into a story and it's almost finished...and then I look at the status and see that it hasn't been updated in over a year. PLEASE just write ONE more chapter if that's all you can. Please? I'll love you forever and ever! :D lol.

This was one of the weirdest, twisted stories, yet I cannot stop reading. I cannot wait to read more. Katrina needs to get more of a big taste of her own medicine. Yet I don't think that it would ever be a smidgen of what she did to them and the others.

loving it!!

Great chapter! It sounds like there might be a wrap-up coming soon...is there? This is a great story, I love your writing!

It's about damn time things got changed around..Let's just hope that the combination was right!

That was great...i love how elliot has a heart and is going to let her shower...i also loved his reaction to liv and am happy that he knows she isnt dead...cant wait for more...

jess

Thank God they finally got the gun and took control. I loved it that Elliot was making Katrina dig her own grave...poetic justice. I can't believe that Elliot is going to let her shower. I just hope that she doesn't do something that causes Elliot to lose the gun. I'm dying for more! Keep up the great work!

Really great chapter! I've been looking forward to an update, and this was awesome! Can't wait for the next one, I hope Lilly's plan works. Keep up the great writing!

please, when can Katrina die? I just need her dead..

i am loving this and am glad that you brought it back...poor liv, poor lilly, poor shizu, poor elliot...okay that was everybody...haha...anyway, great job and i cant wait to see what is going to go down next...

jess

Well written...gritty...angsty...Please continue!

Please update! Please finish the story! :D

This is terrible!! I mean that in a good way...I just hope Olivia gets better and Katrina dies!

That was awesome!! But...poor olivia...that was a horrible punishment for what elliot did, but what elliot did was so cool! i am glad that someone got in a good punch and that he is selfless enough to sleep in the barn so she could have his bed...i love that about him...

update soon please!

very good. I cannot wait for more!