This is so sad but good.

I can't stop re-reading it. Frankly, I don't want to stop :-]

The parts that really hit me were:

"If you are,

then put a fucking gun to my head,

(or your teeth to my neck)

and pull it's blasted trigger,

(or suck me dry)

for to leave me here

would have the same affect!

And:

A cut to pour the blood,

A drink to cloud the senses.

A pill to ease the pain.

And a shot to make it all end

I really love all of the poetry you've posted. It's so emotional and deep. There's more that I wanted to say in the review, but I forgot it all :-[

Again, thanks for writing this.

XOXO

Caitlin

intense. i love it.

Beautiful. Positively breathtaking.

Woah i love this. It's so sad...those last four lines..

This is really quite beautiful. I love how refreshing a good poem is...

love it! angsty and sad and beutiful and everyhting else! ;P

*cries*

Oh shiz o.o I like this! I am not perfect at poems, nor could I really understand them, but this is awesome! :D I actually understand it!...Almost xD Still great, though. :]

That was really beautifully written...and sad!

AW! i am literaly pouring my eyes out now... thats so sad *sob*

Lexi

The amount of hurt that you put into your writings always leaves my throat tight and my eyes moist.

:'(

that was seriously good! it was amazing, really sad and emotional! genius!

Wow... That was amazing! You are so awesome with EVERYTHING you write. I would be jealous but I'm not because at least I get to read your writing and it's really really wonderful, so I'm happy. Hope your doing okay :]

Lovely Minnie Minty

Honestly, this is brilliant. Have you tried getting something published?