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| elmolover123 2008-07-01 ch 9,  | abuseloved it update soon. everyone is writing about the babysitters themselves but you are writing about one of there old charges. PLZ update soon. i love reading about haley the rebel |
| Scorpiana Silvester 2008-04-19 ch 7, | abuseVery well written!! Update soon? |
| the epitome of randomness 2008-04-19 ch 7, | abuseI know, to a lesser extent, what Hayley feels like, but WOAH! Awesome chapter. |
| Scorpiana Silvester 2008-03-10 ch 6, | abusevery well written! |
| Rachel D Sucks 2008-03-08 ch 2, | abuseThanks for the PM, Rachel, you worthless pile of retarded garbage. Like my comments on your blog? Yeah, I thought so. You are NOTHING, Rachel. Did you read that right? NOTHING. YOU ARE NOTHING. You are just a big ugly retarded burden on society. You should be locked up in an asylum. Have fun fu.cking your dog, "Asher." |
| Rachel D Sucks 2008-03-08 ch 1, | abuseOh, good Lord, Rachel, this sucks. Yes, I said Rachel. EVERYONE knows you are Rachel. We know Rachel doesn't have a real husband. No one would ever marry that stupid, worthless RETARD. Stupid, ugly hydrocephalus-head. Why don't you just DIE, Rachel?? Stop pretending to be "Asher," your "husband." No one buys it. You are not human, Rachel. You are a THING. A retarded THING. You are garbage. You are worthless. You don't deserve to exist. You are NOTHING. |
| nothingtolose18 2008-01-27 ch 6, | abuseWow, good chapter. Update soon! You do a great job at making us feel for Haley, but at the same time letting us see that everyone is right, and that she does need help to control herself. |
| Yutolia 2008-01-23 ch 5, | abuseI like this one so far. You've really progressed as a writer. |
| nothingtolose18 2008-01-22 ch 5, | abuseI do feel bad for Haley! Okay, so I know she made a bad decision, and now she's snapping at Adam, and everything, but I think everyone should cut the poor girl a break! I mean, all the whispering? Come on! But, Adam's right, they could have gotten punished a lot worse. Anyway, the fact of the matter is that I liked this chapter, please update again soon! |
| the epitome of randomness 2008-01-22 ch 5, | abuseOh no. Playing Gwen Stefani full blast. She must me angry. Personally, I'd suggest Red Jumpsuit Apparatus next time. Good chapter, though they did get off pretty lightly. |
| nothingtolose18 2008-01-12 ch 4, | abuseAww, poor Haley! I know she shouldn't have jumped into the fight, but still - I know I would FLIP if someone were to hurt my sister! I really, REALLY like this story! Grr, mad at Mrs. Braddock, though - she shouldn't have made Haley feel so bad for what happened. It wasn't her fault, after all. Anyway, update again soon! |
| YellowRoseOfTexas 2008-01-12 ch 4, | abuseThis chapter is where you really captured my attention! Nice work. I can't wait to see what happens next. And I'm worried about Matt, with all his injuries, especially the broken fingers. Matt and Haley are my favorites, too. :) |
| the epitome of randomness 2008-01-11 ch 4, | abuseThat fight was terrible!! Die that big kid die! You were right, Hayley and her mum could've handled that very differently. |
| MissMeg377 2007-12-10 ch 3, | abuseI like this story a lot so far! Very gripping and real. Update soon! |
| writingtiger 2007-12-07 ch 3, | abuseOH MY GOSH... LOVE THE MASH - GFA reference! Rock on! |