Seriously, I just love the way you picture Hidan through all your fanfic. I knew he was the kind to swore like hell, but the way you're making him swore is just pure laughing and amusement. Keep the good work and try to find some new ideas to write on him!

Ohmygoodness, after being a reader of your fics for so long, I finally review. I love the way you can take 2 random characers and portray them and their interactions in a completely realistic way, it's really priceless and especially rare on this site. This fic was so funny, the way you just put in a wonderful OC that actually helped to accentuate the story and catalyse the interaction between Temari and Hidan- who are perfectly in character, good job there- and the way you took the backgrounds of Temari and Hidan and molded it to fit in with an AU (Chiyo-baa, a fighting nun? And Gaara a shameless coffee addict, fantastic and totally believable.) Plus the liver-eating! There's enough crack there to make anyone's day. Love your writing and your AUs, don't stop churning these delightful one-shots out! Though some of them are so good you might want to consider making more chapter stories :D

I think I've mentioned this before but...

YOU ARE, LIKE, TOTALLY AWESOME, SERIOUSLY. Sososososososososo cuttee c: This made me smile :DD

I love how you portray the characters in your fics. From the sick!fics to the so-utterly-fluffy!fics your writing skills are the shiz ( n _n)b

That was adorable. Even though I'm a bit wary of OCs, Ren fit perfectly.
And Hidan and Temari? Totally in character.

You somehow made mortal combat funny. I applaude you.

I have to say, this story was very refreshing to read :3

I've quite frankly gotten sick of the random "oh, so-and-so somehow get together for some random fucked up reason" crackpairing stories, and it's incredibly nice to find one just about a friendly relationship.

10/10.

loved this story! it's inspired me to write a hidatema fic, but i doubt it will be as good as yours.

normally i never read AU, like ever ever. but your stories are so good i decided to give it a try and i was hooked the entire time. normally i get bored and skim through a lot of fics but every bit of this had my eyes glued to the screen. loved it, broke out laughing quite a few times. your Hidan is amazing, i only wish i could write crack pairings with one pinch of the talent you have.
thank you for this.

Well, then. I must admit, I am now hooked on stories of Hidan and Temari as friends. Or enemies. Anyway, thank you for broadening my horizons! (And hopefully not thinking I'm a nerd for actually saying, 'broadening my horizons'.)

hm... i feel guilty that this is barely more than one sentence... but. loved the story. a lot. :D

I am, at the moment, amazed at how this magnificent story had the power to touch my heart.
No, I didn't cry or laugh or whatever, but I did have that little feeling that edges into your heart as you read GOOD STORIES.

Nice story, or stories, might I say. I read Quotidians too. You make really good fanfiction. I was very jealous when I saw how good you explain things. Your stories don't drag on boringly. Is that even a word? Boringly... Hm... Probably not. Yeah, I'm always balancing on the egde of going insane when the stories drag, but yours? No! Yours are so great even the explanitory stuff at the begginning of the story is great! Yes, Emmy-chan34 is my username, but I was to lazy to log on to write this.

Luvvies,
Emmy-chan

Hahaha! This has got to be the BEST TemariHidan fic I've ever read! This was just so damn hilarious! I couldn't stop laughing :D
Their meeting was really unique. Hehehe... Eat his liver... Hah!
I loved this in every possible way :D

I'm officially in love with your sand sib modern remakes! Good job, and personally, I think it'd be cool if you did like a series of modernized Naruto stories including more characters from the original story-line.

I loved this story. Very very much. Not just because it was terrifically written, though! Temari's persona in this story is very much like mine. I completely understood her emotions and reactions to events, and the consequences of loneliness she received. She did things that I do on a constant basis. I could feel the juices running through my veins when she beat that thief's ass (:< Yeah, I once beat up a guy too. Though guilty to say, violence does feel good sometimes. (Learned from a brother (:)

It's so awesome to finally read a story whose character I could completely understand since the traits are so related. Not that I have a druggie papa or whorebag mama...

And your story also had me thinking about the deeper aspects of "why". I just read this story thinking at first, oh it's just gonna be another good firefly story, maybe I'll review, maybe I won't. But as I progressed into the story I found myself thinking, hey, that's exactly how I would've done. And that's sort of how my mindset is programming right now too. But I read that part about Gaara and Kankuro telling their sister, "Maybe you don't want to get hurt."
Why do people project negativity on others because someone projected negativity onto them?
Why have I been aware of how I've been acting and its social effects but "enjoyed" being cold?
Why am I socially retarded as well?

I hope I get some kind of Hidan in my life someday.

So as brownie points you can also consider the psychological effect your story had on me: others don't deserve coldness because someone has been cold to you. It sucks to be socially retarded, seriously. Friends do feel good. And stepping out of the comfort zone can be a way of finding more comfort.

Yeah. Enough about what it did to me. Thanks for writing this story. It inspired a sprout where I thought the seed was too deeply buried.
By the way, all your other Temari/Hidan/or just Hidan fictions are great too. I'm reading them al right now (:

And I noticed you have a way with words that is so simple, yet the text flows like silk. Sentences had enough detail but not too much detail, just a pinch enough to allow the reader to visualize what is going on real clearly. I think I'm gonna read this fiction twice more and commit some of it to memory (:
You are a truly talented writer. Not because you are currently attending university (or so your profile says) but because you seriously. Know. How. To. Write.
In fact, your stories are in ways better than those published. If you actually wrote real stories of your own, I think you would reach J.K. Rowling or Roald Dahl or Stephenie Meyer (her books' popularity, I mean) level real quickly.

I also read in several places here and there that you love long reviews. And as you can see, haha. I love giving long reviews. To those whose writing captured my fancy. I have nothing to critique, your story is great, please continue writing. Once again your story really touched me. Very, very few objects of emotion, whether fanfiction, published book, video, dance, etc. really made me feel anything like yours did.

Hope you enjoyed this long review. (: