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| C2-Chikaru 2008-08-22 ch 11, | abuseIt would seem resonable to write a chapter like this since its all realistic and all with the problems on energy in the world of Gaia. This leads me to think a darker plot filled chapter is up ahead. Rufus always seem to be able to scheme his way to Cloud doesn't he -_-' Always being used like a puppet, there's going to be a negative to this right!? Smiling to themselves >x |
| Imagineareallycoolpennamehe... 2008-08-19 ch 11, | abuseDamn. In the middle of the day? Doing laundry must be Clouds secret fetish. :P Nothing left to say I guess except that you keep hitting the ball out of the park. Keep it up...err...or else...I'll uh...I'll throw my computer out of a window! Wouldn't you just hate to be responsible for that?! |
| Toons 2008-08-19 ch 11, | abuseI think I read the first version of this (I believe it ended a few chapters before the Cloud and Tifa's wedding). I'm SO loving it again. I completely forgot about it actually. Found it at GA for as a nomination. Can't wait for the next chapter! |
| Summoner Yuki 2008-08-18 ch 11, | abuseLOVE IT!! |
| Tori128 2008-08-06 ch 11, | abuseI'm surprised this fic hasn't gotten like a zillion reviews! It's absolutely wonderful! Please update! |
| Raie 2008-08-04 ch 11, anon. | abuseThis was an absolutely beautiful and amazing story. I had so many personal laughs I got out of this and it was just beautifully put together. You are amazing. |
| Shari Joy Rose 2008-08-03 ch 1, | abuseI liked it 'till they suddenly jumped in bed together, too OOC for me which is odd because the rest of the story was pretty in character. I know they've been basically waiting for this for 2 years, but it still seems too sudden. Oh well. |
| freekstylenoypi 2008-08-01 ch 11, anon. | abuseyou'll make al gore proud! :) ahahaha... i love this fic! the characters... are... well... in character!! i can really see them in the situation you put them! the laundry bit was brilliant! AHU!! AHU!! AHU!! you owe me sleep! i've had so many sleepness nights wondering about your next update! soo... UPDATE! |
| Kattzia 2008-07-29 ch 1, | abuseWow, I am actually quite flattered that you'd ask me!! The action is most defiantly appreciated and fluently integrated into the storyline, the description really quite vivid. It sets up the whole idea of cloud starting to realise about being a real family, ect. Straight in, no messing around, with action scenes that are easy to read and imagery that flows straightforwardly into the main chunks of the story. Plus, you included a little bit about the weapon which I vaguely remember asking for! The use of the game’s moves was very smooth too- blade beam being one of my personal favourites! However, I must say that bits of the battle were confusing as to whose point of view we were reading from. It took me a few reads to realise that the ‘noisy chocobo’ was in reference to cloud on his bike, but you can easily rectify that I bet. It’s the part from ‘Predictably’ to ‘top spot’ I’m on about. Sorry I’ve taken so long to get back to you! ~Katzia |
| typical 2008-07-27 ch 11, | abuseHey, i haven't reviewed your story yet, so i'm gonna start now! lol i think you got paid to advertise solar power! Just kidding, it is a good way to save the environment. I'm excited for the babies! |
| Jenny Rocker 2008-07-27 ch 11, | abuseTwo very enthusiastic thumbs up! Like the revisions ;) |
| wicked_design 2008-07-26 ch 3, anon. | abuseOk. Although I'm a huge FF VII, I'm not usually a huge CLOTI (or Cloud in general--because I'm just aghast at how 'broody' he can get :p), I usually opted for the supporting characters fan fics, BUT your fic is just so wonderful. Very well-written (makes it extra enjoyable to read) and just generates good feelings for me reading them. Although I've read ALL the chapters, I'm rereading again and again, becuz, it's just that awesome. Continue writing and I totally thank you for writing this. :D |
| Roxy200620 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseGod I love this story so much! Its my absolute favorite! I don't want it to end and I wish you would keep going but I know that you sadly can't. Please keep writing and I always will remember this story. |
| xoxphi 2008-07-26 ch 1, | abuseOMG lurve your story Each one-shot has a very interesting plot it has the right amount of fluff and serious stuff that make sense hope to hear from you soon =) |
| MtReload 2008-07-25 ch 11, | abuseGreat chapter, looking forward to more :). |