I just finished reading this. It's so cute and funny. Well written, I like the dialogue and character interaction.

AHAHAHAHAHA, that was great! I got the reply review thing, and yeah, I found out it's done. I've never watched Tsubasa Chronicles before, so I Wiki'd it. Fay is just like I imagined him, lol. Not Kurogane at all, though. Or the Mokona. For some reason, I thought the Mokona were like those things in Kappa Mikey in between segments...the little rice cake things? I don't know WHY IN SAM HECK I thought that XD

Anyway, it was adorable, very well-written, yaoi forever and all that junk. However, I might have missed it but Ashura didn't seem to come back into the story 0_o

I'm probably just being unobservant and junk. Did he leave permanently or what? He vanished and tada, like magic he was gone.

But the kid part was one of the cutest. The Mokona were adorable too, lol. The black one is my favorite...*hits black Mokona with hammer* So cute...yet so hopelessly evil. XD

Anywayz, I'll be reading more from you, don't worry. 10/10.

"There’s word going around that you’ve got it bad for the child I created."

"WH-! THAT’S A LIE!" Kurogane roared, clenching his fists together and flying up close to the woman’s face, hoping to appear intimidating. "WHO SAID SUCH DISGUSTING THINGS?! I‘LL KILL ‘EM!"

Ahahahaha, Kuro-san got it for Fai, how cute XD

Yaoi love is so adorable. Keep writing this or I'll have to sic Ratiasu on you...after she's had coffee. lol.

"I'll give you a mouthful..." Kurogane grumbled petulantly, the opportunity to make a very dirty joke out of that sentence completely flying over his head.

OMIGOD, YOU DID IT AGAIN.

There's going to be one hilarious joke in every chapter, lol. I'm reading ch. 3 now. Good job.

“Yes. Maybe one day you’ll get to rip out your eye for the person you love,” Ashura said warmly.

OMG THAT WUZ FREAKIN HILARIOUS.

I love this! *reads ch. 2*

I love the couple Kurogane and Fai, but the thing at then end with cow Syaoran and Tree Sakura was to cute!

I loved this fic to bits~ X3

Not only does it have a rare pairing I've always wanted to read/see(KyleFai, even if its sorta onesided yet not really that either), but it makes the old Thumbelina I watched as a kid a lot more entertaining now. =D I always enjoy little fairy tells brought back with yaoi content instead of the bleh princexprincess relationships. =d Also helps that it has more of a twist and interesting content in it then the movie I saw had. X3

ANYHOO! As I was saying, loved the fic and will more then likely reread it again in time, like I usually do. Keep up the great work!

ah how cute right mixture of humor and angst! :3 Wonde rwhat the kidsll look like/act lol the one looking like kuro acts like fai visa versa!

Im not sure I understand didnt it say he was years in the underground and the wedding went without a hitch?? So then why does it switch over to him barely having the wedding is he just imagineing the years if so howd kurotan find the bird since Fai was the one that made it work?? Can you answer me? I put my emial on it thanks! GREAT story by the way your such a good writer! Except better wording in some parts please...that or I read it wrong.

Because it just isn't the end without Syaoran the cow having his little two cents. XD Loved it, and light bulbs! *gigglesnort* I'm sorry, that chilren thing was so funny. Great job!

lol it was cool! Im lookin forward to reading the rest of it Ive needed a long fic with humor init! But what did you mean by "total girl" how rude! You couldve written something else for that~

ohh!! a fav for sure, great story time fic.

Ja ne

Fun! I love it!

Judi

my first thought was eh? wasn't that fic suppossed to be complete?
but it's so cute!
thank you so very much for this epilogue!

Uh? But.. It isn't complete?
XDD OOh, this chapter is soo... XDD So! I laughed so much...