MORE!!!!!

How can you end it there? You HAVE to write more! It was good though. It was very different from most stories that i have read! WRITE MORE!!!
~Emu

That was the most beautiful and wonderful story about James and Lily that I have EVER read. It's abolutely beautiful. I hope you write a sequel. email me if you do.

Wow. please continue this.

It's people who write cliffies who are the source of my madness. WHYYYYYY?!?!? Poor Remus. I should be saying poor Lily, but no. continue.

WRITE MORE SOON PLEEZ!!!!!!!! Its so great!

~Shayla
"These acts shatter steel, but they cannot dent the steel of American resolve."~George Bush

~If these horrible people aren't punished while alive, God will punish them in death.~

~Psalm 23: "Even though I walk through the valley of the shadow of death, I fear no evil, for you are with me."
GOD BLESS AMERICA

YAY! Hey, you just better continue soon... Alright, here's my highly flattering, but totally honest review on this story.
An addicting, inspiring, and beautiful story of a girl who's life was shattered by death, and hopefully, will be redeemed by love. Keep writing!
What do you think? Next time shall I write a full-length newspaper review? This time I decided on the kind of excerpt one would use from a newspaper review on say, the book cover... anyway, I love it!

Absolutley wonderful! You have a great talent for writing, one that I very much envy to the ends of the earth. I'm lovin' this story!

OmG, this is a great story. So sad, and... poetic. I love stuff like that! So far I think it's beautiful... I'm very much hoping and looking for some romance! Can't wait till it comes! The friendship, the saddness... I can kind of even relate to her with what's happened in my life. Closing the world out... I give chapter 1 a 10!

This was good! Keep writing!!! :O)

cool! update soon please!! what's this about moony? this will be j/l right?

Oooooo! Great job!! :O)

Whoa...
please keep going with this.
you express everything really well, makes me want to read more.
one problem, there isn't more to read.

That story is wonderful I want to read it over again.

cool! i can't wait for the rest!!