Wow! This is one of the best fanfics I've ever read. You have a wonderful ability to stay in character. It's great to see a story with characters instead of caricatures. I normally don't like stories that stray too far from an existing storyline, but you're story flows well and makes sense. I loved the way you rewrote the pineapple salad scene where Roy is supposed to die, it really did feel like alternate universe and maybe both of those endings are floating around out there somewhere. Loved the Claudia/Roy interactions. Please write more soon!

I have a feeling that Claudia Grant-Fokker is in the early stages of pregnancy. I wonder how Roy is gonna handle that? Now that is gonna be interesting.


I hope the next chapter will be coming out soon!!


Knightewolfe

Ah, one more point of correction. When Dixon was killed, he like Max was a 3rd Lieutenant.

This story is very very good. I'm liking it so far.

Keep up the good work. :)

KW

Uhh, you've probably already got loads of reviews about this but I'm going to add one more:

Khyron Kravshera is the commander of the Seventh Mechanized Division of the Botoru Battalion, not the Seventeenth.

Sorry, I'm a big Khyron and Azonia fan so I just had to point that out.

:)


KW

I LOVE this work! Again the Roy and Claudia moments are my favorite, however this chapter the Vince/Claudia/Jean scene nearly beat it out. Nice planting of seeds (and no pun intended considering the plant found) with Gidsen. Trouble brewing with him and if its what I suspect, it will be a natural human reaction considering what's happen. A prelude Breetai was getting with his first officer. Again another marvelous chapter where characters are king, yet not an angstfest. Thank you for continuing this!

nice chapter, dont take too long to updated please

Thanks again for another great update! I'm sorry for the lateness of this review. I thought I reviewed it but I don't see it and I know I've read this update. Anyway, GREAT twist with Claudia and Roy, it really isn't a stretch for them not to realize what is happening. After all the events it just wouldn't be the first thing to come to mind and that makes it even better. I look forward to when it hits their conscious minds. Kyle really needs a kick in his coherency, but in canon he was still thick to the end. Some people are like that so good portrayal with him. I suppose that says one point about the style of writing (and there are many) that I like. How honest the writing is to characters. No twisting of their metaphorical arms to get them to fit a role in this telling, keeping in character with the changes and detailing of this tale. Thank you for continuing it!

Marvelous seeing the meeting of Azonia and Khyron through Grel's outlook, it continues to be a very romantic story over all. Miss having a Roy/Claudia moment, but it was wonderful to see the ex-spies/Bridge bunnies, lots of Miriya and the very awkward (but fun!) Lisa/Rick scene. This series continues chapter after chapter to capture my attention remaining as fresh in this chapter as chapter one. Thank you for continuing this!

Sorry I don't review as much as I should - Nice chapter - good lead ins for more action. Keep up the good work!

wellcome back

Another great chapter! I'd love to see more R/L interactions, but the short section is always a gem!

Another magnificient chapter! Loved the visit with Azonia, romance in the air and the beauty of it neither of them know it. Much like Rick and Lisa, another adorable scene, by the way. Also liked Gloval's visits to both Edwards and Lang, it said much about the people and situations involved in an entertaining manner. Of particular note this chapter is your use of artificial gravity, and I note that because this is the only the second story I've every read in over two years to make note of one particularity of AR, one could walk on the walls. In the other story that author had crew walking on the traditional floor, and above them, crew walked on the 'ceiling.' The implications are there with AR but few authors make use of it. Very commendable, but by no least the best part of this story. That is, as in every chapter, the handling of characters. Letting the readers, as in me, care about them and not just have them be a name of a plot point or archtype. Like with Roy and Claudia, I can't thank you enough keeping this couple alive, they are constantly the high point of every chapter and each chapter has many high points. Going back to a non-character note, Lang's explanation of a non-nuclear winter result was well done, liked how he first tried the direct explanation and when he noticed Gloval might not grasp it all went to the explanation that worked. Nor is his intelligence limited to science, great uptake noticing it might not be a good idea for Exedore to wander alone on the SDF-1. Thank you for continuing this excellent series!

Wonderful story. I love it, very interesting

oh,oh, just wait till the trio see Lisa and Rick.

He is so in love about her... and of curse, death is death ^_^