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Fae Thatcher
2009-12-31 . chapter 8
Oh boy... you all suggest to inspire you to write more, but you all seem to do a very fine job of it yourself.

Well, so, first off, nicely written. I really enjoy everyone's comments and their thought processes...they make me laugh. ha ha. Um, what else? Really like the troll, very original, very...magic-like. I love Evangeline (very pretty name) and Sirius...but I think I love Isabelle and Lupin most of all. Very sweet.

I like that they're all at the camp, but it's not really a normal situation...that's good. Er...it really seems like Evangeline and Sirius have some, uh, serious history, so that might be fun to know more about. Of course, every story can use some snogging, so... wink wink, nudge nudge. Or just more cuteness like snuggling and massive flirting :D

Just wondering? Why do all of these fanfics seem to have Sirius as a terribly hungry bloke? With sugar high problems? Oh well, I guess it doesn't matter...it's funny. I love the Sirius/Lily dynamic. They make me giggle.

So, keep it up, please!

Looking very much forward to the next chapter,

Fae Thatcher
Lily Hermione Potter
2009-12-29 . chapter 8
Hi, I really like your fanfiction. However, I noticed it stops at chapter eight. Are you planning on adding more? Please do...I really love James+Lily fics. Sirius and Eva make a great couple. I want them to be friends again quickly. Please add more!
Whatever Way the Wind Blows
2009-12-28 . chapter 8
Great story! I might be addicted to it. I really think you need to update very soon and more often.
forever
2009-12-22 . chapter 8
I love it !! Especially that Remus and Isabella are getting together so cute :) Though I do think something more should happen with James and Lilly . I can't wait for the next chapter , post soon X
amaramichelle
2009-12-20 . chapter 8
I wasn't to impressed with HBP but it was alright, I love your story. Please update again soon.
fivefootzeroO
2009-11-08 . chapter 8
I don't really read much Harry Potter fanfiction, but I have to say, this one is amazing!! :D
I love all of the characters, and the story is just so good!
Please update soon, so I cn find out what happens next! :) <3
RaspberryXuan
2009-10-25 . chapter 8
Hello Rainbow Crystal :) Just wanted to say I really loved reading your story and honestly can't wait to know what happens next! The feeling of suspense if very annoying, and I do wish you are going to continue the story... Can't wait to continue reading till the end... So yeah, here's a little poke from me to get your words flowing :) Sincerely, RaspberryXuan
CompareTheMeerkatDotCom - Lozz
2009-10-24 . chapter 8
You better update NOW! I need MOREE!
Awsomeness, this is! I love it
IDreamOfFantasy
2009-10-23 . chapter 8
wow, I love this story! I think you've created a special something with all the characters, and i obviously love Sirius' character, his childness and also his...seriousness, when he get's it lol, and the start of the story was awesome! Of course I'm a huge fan of Lily and James so this Fanfic just works for me! brilliant job! cannot wait for the next chapter so hurry up!! haha
keep writing
harumscarum
2009-10-21 . chapter 8
I love this, and I really hope that you update soon! :)
cool dawn breeze
2009-09-07 . chapter 8
You have a GREAT story line and you deffinetally need to update more often!
Anna
2009-08-28 . chapter 8
please please please write the rest. I cant wait! Loved the story! :D
OpenAtTheClose
2009-08-10 . chapter 1
I love this! It's seriously amazing! Can't wait for more!
Through Darkness
2009-08-10 . chapter 8
I've been enjoying all of the layers you've put into this. It's been really interesting.
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Through Darkness and Light /|x|\
J.K.RowlingWannabe
2009-08-10 . chapter 8
Dude! Are you ever gonna write another chapter?This is so enertaining! I can't wait months for the next thing to happen! Please keep writing!
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