HAHA this is so funny! please update soon!! GO SASUHINA!!

WHY DID YOU STOP?!
PLEASE CONTINUE!! IT'S SO GOOD!!

HUH?

thats funny you should really finish the story funny as hell

lol cool chappie

Hm... this is seeming a bit contrived. And they both seem rather ooc.

Hehe... funny. Some typos, but it's still readable. Is the scene with Tenten significant?

The ending was strong.

The syntax was a bit choppy, and the switch in pov with the sentence "Today, Hyuuga Hinata is in a very good mood." was a bit jarring.

Otherwise, however, this looks like a good start.

Wow,really funny story. It made me laugh. Please update soon, k?

very cute story love the OOC ness

EK I FREKEN LOVE YORU STORY PLEASE UPDATE SOON BECAUSE I LOVE IT! EXPECIALLY THE NICKNAMES!

haha~ i like this fic! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D

this is bada**

*falls over laughing*
FROG! That's..that's...priceless.
I have to say though this is one of the ONLY Naru/Hina triangles I actually am enjoying. Usually I hate Naru/hina...

AH! Finish! *Gollum voice--FINISH THE PRECIOUS!

P.S. By the way it was excellent. Hope you finish it soon. I can't wait to see how it'll end up.