This is just PERFECT. Such a sweet, in-character vignette -- excellent work!

this is awesome, i wish there were more of lloyd/cecile fics.

aaw... that was cute. I love this pairing, Lloyd reminds me of a cross between Szayel Aporro from Bleach and a very mellow Kaitou Sai from Majin tantei nougami neuro. Also, hes really really cute.

Ya know, for the first few episodes with him i was confused as to who was in charge between em, since Cecil doesnt act much like an assistant. guess thats what makes em a great work pairing.

Anyways, id love to see more!

!! love this! lloyd doesnt have enough fanfics written about him...

*_*
marisol akyri

Your story is very interesting as far as a sort-of romance goes. I don't believe I've seen a more clever way to describe two people's personalities and how they compliment each other. I think you captured Lloyd the best; I could 'hear' his voice actor saying all of his lines. He wouldn't be good at cooking at all, and I think your lines regarding him being a genius, but not a scientist, were spot on for his character.

Cecile on the other hand... well, it took me a couple of read-throughs, but I guess I can see Cecile as you see her too. I'm not sure about her doubts on whether or not she's qualified to do her job (I always thought of her as being more than smart enough) but Lloyd's reasons to "keep her around" seem very good to me. A sporadic soul like him would need a nice solid wall to bounce off of. All in all, it was a very good, very unique story and I applaude you for capturing the characters so well in such a different way.

Prior to reading this fic, I never really had that much of an interest in Cecile or Lloyd, but this was just too well-written and adorable to ignore. I loved how scientifically Cecile regarded cooking and the interactions between her and Lloyd were just so cute. Your fic has really made me want to pay more attention to these two and some of the other characters I've been kind of "meh" about up until now.

A fic where I wouldn't change anything in the world. The best character sketch I've seen in a vary long while. I'm smiling as I write this comment, and feeling like a little boy again. Thanks.

That was just awesome. Lloyd and Cecile were portrayed perfectly. Congratulations on the great story.

What an outstanding piece! This is a really rare example of strict IN-chara that is no way boring to read! You did a wonderfull job on both Lloyd and Cécile, expecially the second one. Both her affection and annoyance at her even too much peculiar superior are perfectly balanced, and the rendition of her character is fantastic. I've always thought, too, that the bond between Lloyd and Cécile is hardly fitting a standard definition and hardly understandable in the eyes of the people that live around them, and you portrayed it really well: comrades, colleagues, lovers or whatever, that's what they are. Very nice job on the mental method of Cécile too (hilarious to read) and on the plot, that thought being simple, is elaborate enough to counterpart the introspective side of the story. Great job!

This story was so very cute!
I absolutely loved every word!

Oh! This story's so cute! I just wish there are more LloydCecile fanfics though. Great Job!

Sensational! Your portrayal of Cecile and Lloyd – their relationship in particular – is spot on. It's a rare treat to see supporting characters treated with such literary care. Brava~!

Such a cute story~~ >.<
I've always liked Cecile and Lloyd, they're just perfect!
And I really liked how you wrote their relationship.
Freinds and partners, and a bit more than that.
Always together and there for each other.
Great job! ^^

aww that was so cute. well done ^_^

I admit that I have only watched one episode of this series (I was being an insomniac one night when my grams wasn't home)and I'm a little cofused on the plot, but this was... AWESOME! The episode I watched... I immediately fell in love with Lloyd
^/^
I don't exactly know too much about anything, but I love this story! I can imagine that it could possibly be a short story instead of a one-shot thing, but you don't have to. It's awesome the way it is. It gives me another outlook on him that I couldn't agree more to. The pairing is really interesting as well...