Nice, very nice. Though Lamia is actually another snake like creature which is confusing since you used it to mean something very different. but otherwise lovely XD

Up until about here:

""Yes," he replied curtly, watching as the Headmaster's eyes returned to their normal size. He hadn't realized that they could get so wide."

I honestly believed what Albus was asking if Severus was serious about was if he wanted a lemon drop. On other notes, I enjoyed the story because I am hoping that him being a vampire will save him from dieing in the seventh book. Though this obviously has no base in cannon unless I want to think far to much than what is allowed at 4:30 in the morning. Thanks for the fic, Shadow.

more please. can you continue?

great one shot!

brilliant!

very amusing

Ah-HAH! Well, I always suspected Sevi wasn't fully human! This fic was fun!

Only, if he has Albus' permission to bite people who are harming the students, why did Dolores Umbi*ch get away un-drained?

BTW, "millennia" is plural. I think you meant a millennium.

Um... Well, that was certainly different to anything I have read before. But I liked it- I really did. It's sort of mysterious, yet predictable at the same time (I figured the vampyre was Severus early in the fic).

And he wasn't even done yet.

"Well over a millennia," he declared just as Albus took a sip of his tea.

Dumbledore choked and his hand jerked, spilling tea onto his lap as he attempted to put the cup back onto the saucer and set the two items on his desk as he coughed.

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*snickers* That was kind of mean.

Heh, i always knew there was something otherworldly about Snape... and something strange in the way he always seemed to know when people were places they shouldn't be.

The idea of the unflappable Albus Dumbledore being completely flapped amused me.

I really like the way you set this out, and how you waited to let the reader know what the person was (since they weren't human) and while hints about the characters identity were dropped you waited unil the very end to confirm it.

I really enjoyed reading this.

Myst.

AWESOME. I LOVE Severus-creature stories. They rock. Too bad you're not adding more. This is just wicked.

I would love to see what you write next. Your a great writer and your stories are great too.

Thank you,

Terri