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Voldy's gone Moldy
2009-01-18 . chapter 5
you are realy far behind
nancyandnedforever
2008-12-02 . chapter 5
Yeah...ok...it's been over a year. But update!
Pineapplepeople
2008-05-17 . chapter 5
Really cool! Is it gonna be shulesy?
camerabugs
2007-10-16 . chapter 1
Oh, come on, please continue. I really love this story. I love the way Shawn kept complaining about being bored. It really sounded just like him.
Han-Skywalker
2007-10-10 . chapter 5
i can't wait to read everything thing else you have written
DeanParker
2007-10-02 . chapter 5
so...if none of my guesses were right but one was close...that means it wasn't lassie, or chief, or mcnab or gus, so that meant that it was close to the murderer...

so that meant it could be the person who saw the murder, or it could be someone who helped solve the murder...

ANY HINTS??

Update!
edward-and-bella-forever
2007-10-02 . chapter 5
oh i cant wait for either of those. UPDATE ANYTHING SOON!
Nyxelestia
2007-10-01 . chapter 5
Hm, I'll make sure to check out your fictionpress account. I made one but I completely forgot about it until now. I have to post something on mines, too. :D

And this chapter was admittedly all right. Not your best. *smiles sheepishly* But I still like it. Can't wait for an update!
ACCOUNT HAS BEEN TERMINATED
2007-10-01 . chapter 5
once again, i love it!!
que
2007-09-30 . chapter 4
that sounds awesome! please hurry! :)
Nyxelestia
2007-09-30 . chapter 4
Hi! Great chapter. I love Juliet not wanting Shawn to know about how relieved she was when he was safe. :D And yes, this one is evil. Please remember I have a TRAINED hoarde of rabid plot bunnies and I'm not afraid to use them!

And yay - the cavalry has arrived! (though how did they get there so fast? :D)

Please keep up the great work and udpate ASAP!

~Nyxie~
Han-Skywalker
2007-09-30 . chapter 4
“I was this relieved one time,” Shawn commented. “I thought Taco Barn had gone out of business, but it was just Labor Day.”

LOllollollollol! write more soon please!!
Tigger66
2007-09-30 . chapter 4
I loved it! please contenue!

Goodluck!

**Tigger**
sas420
2007-09-30 . chapter 4
to lazy to login...anyways...Another cliffie! and this time it is the murdered isn't it...tsk tsk tsk...anyways the writing is good the plot is good keep it up
raindropsX
2007-09-30 . chapter 4
like i said before it is a scary librarian. great chapter.
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