 Voldy's gone Moldy 2009-01-18 . chapter 5you are realy far behind |
 nancyandnedforever 2008-12-02 . chapter 5Yeah...ok...it's been over a year. But update! |
 Pineapplepeople 2008-05-17 . chapter 5Really cool! Is it gonna be shulesy? |
 camerabugs 2007-10-16 . chapter 1Oh, come on, please continue. I really love this story. I love the way Shawn kept complaining about being bored. It really sounded just like him. |
 Han-Skywalker 2007-10-10 . chapter 5i can't wait to read everything thing else you have written |
 DeanParker 2007-10-02 . chapter 5so...if none of my guesses were right but one was close...that means it wasn't lassie, or chief, or mcnab or gus, so that meant that it was close to the murderer...
so that meant it could be the person who saw the murder, or it could be someone who helped solve the murder...
ANY HINTS??
Update! |
 edward-and-bella-forever 2007-10-02 . chapter 5oh i cant wait for either of those. UPDATE ANYTHING SOON! |
 Nyxelestia 2007-10-01 . chapter 5Hm, I'll make sure to check out your fictionpress account. I made one but I completely forgot about it until now. I have to post something on mines, too. :D
And this chapter was admittedly all right. Not your best. *smiles sheepishly* But I still like it. Can't wait for an update! |
 ACCOUNT HAS BEEN TERMINATED 2007-10-01 . chapter 5once again, i love it!! |
 que 2007-09-30 . chapter 4 that sounds awesome! please hurry! :) |
 Nyxelestia 2007-09-30 . chapter 4Hi! Great chapter. I love Juliet not wanting Shawn to know about how relieved she was when he was safe. :D And yes, this one is evil. Please remember I have a TRAINED hoarde of rabid plot bunnies and I'm not afraid to use them!
And yay - the cavalry has arrived! (though how did they get there so fast? :D)
Please keep up the great work and udpate ASAP!
~Nyxie~ |
 Han-Skywalker 2007-09-30 . chapter 4“I was this relieved one time,” Shawn commented. “I thought Taco Barn had gone out of business, but it was just Labor Day.”
LOllollollollol! write more soon please!! |
 Tigger66 2007-09-30 . chapter 4I loved it! please contenue!
Goodluck!
**Tigger** |
 sas420 2007-09-30 . chapter 4 to lazy to login...anyways...Another cliffie! and this time it is the murdered isn't it...tsk tsk tsk...anyways the writing is good the plot is good keep it up |
 raindropsX 2007-09-30 . chapter 4like i said before it is a scary librarian. great chapter. |